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My First Of Many EntriesCategory: (general)
Monday, 1 January 2007
03:27:58 PM (GMT)
Hi I'm Autumn and I have decided that I need comments on my poetry that I've
written. Here's the first:

Thank You

Thank you for the sunshine
Thank you for the rain
Thank you for the happiness 
Thank you for the pain

Thank you for the light 
Thank you for the day
Thank you for the night
Thank you for the way

Thank you for the laughs
Thank you for the tears
Thank you for the naps
Thank you for the years

Because of all the thank you's here there's nothing I fear
But out of all the thank you's in the world I thank you most for what is near.

Please everyone tell me what you think. And remember this is a copyrighted poem so
don't plagiarize. Thank you! 

Comments 
beenabratz says:   1 January 2007   271129  
thats good!
did u make it up??
hunnybun458 says :   3 January 2007   881735  
Yes I made it up when I was about 14. I love writing poetry!

 
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