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The Love Story of a girl Called Jim Chpt 9Category: (general)
Friday, 29 December 2006
12:05:10 PM (GMT)
“That… That’s HORRIBLE!!” cried Jim, standing up, ”Oh, I’m gonna
go there now to beat the living daylights out of him!” She started towards him, but
something held onto her shirt. “Huh?” She turned around to see the boy holding
her shirt back. “Please, don’t. The last thing this school needs is more
violence. We have enough of that already,” the boy pleaded as he pointed over to a
fight scene. “See? Every day there’s a fight here. Mainly over who’s richer, or
better accessories.” “Wow, This school is really about clothing and money,
huh?” Jim was interested now, “But it doesn’t seem you are… are you a
commoner like me?” “Uh-uh. I’m the superintendent’s son. My name is Kelsey
Turner,” Josh smiled. But Jim was stunned, ”Please to meet you! I’m Jiminy
Johnson!” To think that I said I was gonna beat someone up in front of the
superintendent’s son! Crap! Jim was freaking out. “Don’t worry, Jim, I
won’t tell my dad you said that,” Josh promised with a wink. Phew. 
“Kelsey, huh? Never thought I’d meet a boy with that name,” Jim laughed.
“Well I never thought I’d meet a girl with the name Jim,” Kelsey protested with
a grin. “Haha. We’re even,” Jim liked this guy, “Wait, how’d you know I
liked to be call Jim?” “Well your in my first 3 periods and advisory. It was kind
of a giveaway.” “Makes sense…” Jim blushed. To think he would remember…
does that mean…? Nah, of all people why would HE like me? 

‹Lora Patsy Poodle› says:   29 December 2006   594956  
Well you might've been waiting for it, and at long last HERE IT
‹Lora Patsy Poodle› says:   29 December 2006   921686  
*waiting and wanting comments*
‹Lora Patsy Poodle› says:   29 December 2006   436148  
*whistle* I hope people will comment tomorrow..... TT_TT
Alygirl52 suggests:   29 December 2006   134819  
Great story! Idea: although it is in the past, I'd like to hear what
happened to her real mom and dad! Maybe she fins out in the newspaper,
car crash, whatever! I just want to know whay happens, but I'm not
sure how you could add that into your story without making it the main
theme of the story. Of course she will want to go to her mom and dad
once she hears about them because of the horrible family she now has,
but that would ruin the plot of the story! Hhhhhhmmmmmm.......
dramagoth says:   30 December 2006   419598  
I love it!! Can't wait for the next part!! 
‹Lora Patsy Poodle› says:   30 December 2006   838327  
The next part is hard to think of... and Aly that is a really good
idea.... muahahahahaha i know how to make it fit *evil grin*
Little_Cutes says:   30 December 2006   239862  
I think  you can make it better.
‹Lora Patsy Poodle› says:   30 December 2006   546983  
Well, writing is hard.... plus I need to get to the romance faster,
after all it is called The LOVE STORY of a Girl Called Jim

But thanks for having confidents in me =3
buttongal shouts:   31 December 2006   664264  
do you like writing alot.i sure do
‹Lora Patsy Poodle› says:   31 December 2006   976292  
I like to write =3 its quite fun =3
mewmewichigo says:   14 January 2007   586826  
kat_katt122 says:   14 January 2007   292175  
This story is really coolio
xoxGabbyxox says:   14 January 2007   336336  
thats so kewl!
‹Lora Patsy Poodle› says:   14 January 2007   366134  
@everyone: thanks people!!! 
Emalynn_W says:   5 July 2007   833237  
Thsi story rocks!!! but the "That...That's HORRIBLE" was a little bit
‹Lora Patsy Poodle› says :   6 July 2007   521195  
I know XD


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