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Monday, 2 February 2009
01:36:59 PM (GMT)
It's a new story I'm writting! I hope you enjoy it! Please tell your friends about
it if you do!!

Chapter 1

We're on the roof. She's standing, looking over the edge. I'm watching her. She
has green eyes and long caramel coloured hair. I don't think I've been noticed. It's
morning. We're on top of a school. I move closer... and closer... and closer. She
still hasn't noticed. Then... push. She screams as she falls. The screams are music
to my ears. Like beautiful angels -No! Sirens singing! She lands. Blood splatters
far. A crowd forms. Lots of gasps, screams and even faints. I take one last look and
leave. My work here is done.
I wake up. Panting, sweating. That was weird! I never have dreams like that! Thank
goodness it was only a dream! I look at my alarm clock. MY ALARM CLOCK THAT WENT OFF
HALF AN HOUR AGO!! I panic and get into my black and white uniform. School today! I
school! It starts too early and finishes too late if you ask me!

	The dream stays in my mind all day. When having breakfast! When brushing my teeth! I
can't help but think about it! I mean, I rarely dream, let alone have nightmares like

	I'm nearly ready to go and tie my dark brown hair back. I'm so glad it isn't the
colour of caramel! My hair's not very long either. It's shoulder length. I would like
to have long hair one day but for now I'm happy the way it is!

	I grab my school bag and walk out the door. My parents are at work and my big
sister's  already at school. It's nice and warm outside so there's no need for my

	I catch up with my friend on the way there. We talk about Sport, Music, Television,
all sorts! Well, she does. I stay quiet and think about my dream. My friend notices.
She turns to me and asks if I'm okay.
	"Oh, I'm fine, Kala!" I lie. "I just had a strange dream."
	"Okay then! Just don't think about it too much! I don't want you to hurt yourself!"
	"Very funny!" I  say as I trip over my own feet and scrape my knee, followed by
howls of laughter from Kala! Very nice!

	We're five minutes late to school! Mainly because I made Kala give me a piggyback
for laughing! We aren't given into trouble but the teacher gives us "the evil eye"
while we get to our seats. I don't like where I sit in class. No one sits near who I
get on with sits near me and the seat behind me is empty! Two seats ahead of me sits
Kana-Lou. She has long caramel coloured hair and green eyes. When I see her my mind
starts to wander and class finishes quick. Not even the bell can bring me back to the
	"Mandy?? Mandy!? The bell's rang!" I distance voice tells me.
	I snap back. "What!?"
	"You were daydreaming the whole time." Kana-Lou says. We aren't good friends so I
don't think she waited here for me. It's more likely she stayed to make sure
everything in her bag was in the right place and that no hairs on her head had moved.
She's like that! She's probably the most popular girl in our year so she has a good
reputation to keep up! At the moment she's going out with a dude called James...
something! I'm not that good at remembering names! Me and Kana-Lou don't hate or
dislike each other. We just didn't click.

	Kana-Lou makes short goodbyes leaving me and Kala alone in the classroom. Something
ticks inside my head. Kana-Lou was the one in my dream! I to into another long trance
of thought, soon to be awakened by Kala once more.
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‹Joanna;FinallySetHerselfFree♥› says:   2 February 2009   614975  
It's soo cool!!!
‹[DAHNANANA..BATMAN!!]› says:   2 February 2009   515517  

How can I improve it?
‹♥ Echo Deluxe ♥› says:   2 February 2009   342689  
i read it yesterday katie...
But still its awsome! :D
‹[DAHNANANA..BATMAN!!]› says:   2 February 2009   412641  

I changed parts though!

I had to retype it in another application coz my laptop's being a nob
‹{Hari-ru♥}› says:   2 February 2009   336274  
*claps* bravo katie pie!!!
i love IT!!
‹[DAHNANANA..BATMAN!!]› says:   2 February 2009   769824  

‹{Hari-ru♥}› says:   2 February 2009   124755  
ya it was great!!! i love the first part. i got a real picture in my
‹[DAHNANANA..BATMAN!!]› says:   2 February 2009   797957  
‹{Hari-ru♥}› says:   2 February 2009   711278  
welcome.    ^.^

make another chanper and i will give you this cake

*holds up cake*
‹[DAHNANANA..BATMAN!!]› says:   2 February 2009   887982  
I have another chapter ready!

I'm putting it up next week

Remind me if I forget!
‹{Hari-ru♥}› says:   2 February 2009   442313  
i gess you will get this cake then ^.^
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   2 February 2009   984469  

I'm so happy you're getting this done! :D
If it's ever published, It would be an interesting title to hear in
The New York Times. :D
‹[DAHNANANA..BATMAN!!]› says:   2 February 2009   553669  



Kirti says:   22 February 2009   488659  
it's pretty good. The only thing I could recomend is maybe using more
comas and less exclaimation points. (because when you use them after
every sentence like that it kinda loses meaing.)
‹krisnah ♥› says :   23 February 2009   698245  
nice story..keep it up..
i'm looking forward to it..


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