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Saturday, 23 August 2008
05:10:25 PM (GMT)
Yura woke up at the break of dawn.She went down stairs to see if her story went to
the news.She turn on the t.v. and right there in front of her the story of her life
quiting the band she was in.She turn off the t.v. and went upstairs to take a shower
and get dress for school.After that she took her binder of music and guitar to
Yura walks though the halls of school and every student was staring at her like what
was wrong with her.In music class she was the top guitar student in her class.The
teacher calls her up front to play a song by Carrie Under wood like ever ever
after.After class she went to the princepal to ask if they could have a school
tryouts for a new band.
"Well of coarse Yura it would be great for the students of Tokyo High School!"the
princepal said.
"Thanks!"Yura said while leaving the princepal's office to the competer room to make
posters for the tryouts.After she made them she post them on every locker at Tokyo
[more later]

‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   24 August 2008   197692  
Well, let me give you some advice(just some tips!)
I think that this is good,but You can do much better! Try adding more
detail in things like the TV broadcast. Actually make it so you can
hear the story, like
"This weekend, so-and-so..."
It would really make a difference!
kingdomheartsfreak122 says :   27 August 2008   243532  
I liked it. A great story is what comes from your heart. There
doesn't have to be much detail.


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