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my deathCategory: (general)
Thursday, 3 April 2008
08:22:56 PM (GMT)
people talking
people beaming
people running 
people screaming

a person here
a person there
a person brave
a person dare

that persons down
that persons head
that persons still
that persons dead

i'm confussed
i'm unaware
i'm running away
i'm getting no where

a person behind me
a person near
a person of hate 
a person i fear

 
i hear the nosie
i hear the crowd
i hear a bom
i hit the ground

my ears are ringing
my eyes are clouding
my hands are shaking
my head is pounding.

my muscals ack
my chest in pain
my stomaches sick
my bodys laim

my heart is slowing
my breaths are small
my mind is blank
ive lost it all
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not done yet, needs alot of editing, a work in progress, idk i wrote it really fast

Comments 
awsome_boy says:   3 April 2008   655238  
Wow, that's pretty good!
mewmew_lettuce says:   3 April 2008   316971  
That's awsome 
ffiona282 shouts :   3 April 2008   196223  
Um, THAT WAS FREAKIN AWSOME!!!
 

 
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