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Monday, 28 June 2010
05:27:42 AM (GMT)
I hear a voice so strong and clear
It whispers to me "Why are you here?"
I say to it "I came to find you,
I now know what I must do"
It whispers again "Are you ready for this though?
That is something you must know"
I nod and say "I'm not sure,
But i do know that my intentions are pure.
I want you to know that if i don't come back
You must make up for what i lack"
It whispers to me "Is that all you wish?
Because I need to know if you're ready for this"
I nod slowly and smile real wide,
Have I learned to swallow my pride?
I don't know and I don't care
Just as long as the voice is there
I take a slow small turn
I didn't like what I had to learn
I open my eyes only to see
The voice is no longer there with me
My eye creates a single tear
I'm still shaking in fear
I feel no more pain
I no longer suffer from strain
I only want the voice to know
To me is where it can always go
I will miss it ever so much
I love the way my life is the one it chose to touch
Last edited: 29 June 2010

Oroborus21 says:   28 June 2010   536331  
typically when poems arent titled by the author, the author or others
simply assign them the title which is the first line of the poem.

in this case: "I hear a voice so strong and clear"

reading the poem its ambiguity leaves me guessing about the "voice"
whether its yourself consciousness, your conscience, an adviser, a
doubt, a lost companion, loss personified, or what..only you could
answer those questions..

but perhaps a suitable title might be "the voice"
kokoro_mimusu says :   29 June 2010   945071  
ok thanks! i've been lookin for a title for a while


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