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Twilight Fanfiction: Dusk of BloodCategory: (general)
Saturday, 28 June 2008
04:37:46 AM (GMT)
PLEASE FORGIVE THE CHEESY TITLE! D:
This is a fanfiction of my Twilight RP.
I would like tips on how the characters talk.

THIS ISN'T gonna be private because I need people to see how I'm doing.

P.S EdwardxBella fans only: Unleeeeeeeeess, you wanna imagine yourself with jacob...
theres two new characters coming in... :D

                                 Tonight I would be what he was, the pain didn't
matter, I would be with him forever now...


                                                                                  
 Chapter 1.
                                                                              
Elisabeth and Dana

Bella

  The light of the dawn was practically unbearable (for as much light as Forks gets),
today Edward was going to do it... Going to do what would keep us together for
eternity... I would become a vampire today...
  Or more so tonight, if I "screamed", which I didn't think I'd do, so someone, which
wasn't likely, close to the Cullen's house would call the police. Of course, you need
to take a lot of precautions when you're a family of vampires. 

  "How about a swimsuit?" I whipped around to see Edward sitting on my windowsill in
a dog-like position.
  "How did you know I was going to get dressed?" I said, getting up out of my messy
bed (I hadn't gotten to making it for a while), "I didn't think you could read my
mind." He shrugged and hopped down to kiss my forehead,
   "It was a smart guess." He said playfully. I sighed, and hopped back onto my bed,
"What did you mean by, 'How about a swimsuit'?" I asked curiously. Edward sat down
beside me, "We're going to the beach today." It sounded like an order. "Alice,
Rosalie you and I." I frowned, Rosalie hadn't been the nicest to me, but maybe she'd
be a little more compassionate?    
   
                                                                                     
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   I had suspected that we would go to the beach by the reservation, but then I
remembered that the Cullen's weren't allowed to go there. But even so, I was
surprised that we went to a different beach. Luckily though, it still had the same
overcast-about-to-rain thing going on above us.

To be continued.(Will write more later)
Last edited: 30 June 2008

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‹† Ammit Eats Dead Souls †› says :   6 July 2008   195467  
Did you write that?

And this:>>Tonight I would be what he was, the pain didn't
matter, I would be with him forever now...
 

 
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