two of my poems, if u read this message and tell me which u think is
better
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two of my poems, if u read this message and tell me which u think is
better
Category: (general)
Sunday, 14 October 2007
09:01:05 PM (GMT)
The stars
So beautiful and bright
A sanctuary from life's prison bars
I wish I didn't have to leave this sight

But there is another sanctuary of mine
A haven away from harm
A place sweet as lime
It is in your arms

And when these two unite
Oh what a beautiful thing!
You are my shield when I fight
And a rock on which I lean

So many different couples
Think we're so naive
Oblivious to their own troubles
You think the same I believe

We may be young
But they'll see
We are a song that shall be sung
And it ends in a sweet melody

But for now lets enjoy this night
And the warmth of each other's arms
Let us gaze 'til light
And let my mother be our alarm

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~second poem~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

People say
There's a song for everyone
I'll have to see
Because right now 
Is a time I need you to comfort me
How is it
That a feeling that started out so simple
Grew to be something so incomparable
You were always there for me
So its no wonder that my feelings grew into a fantasy
So now I find myself unable to sleep
Writing a poem that cries out in my dreams
Screaming to be released
Because I guess its true
That you never knew
About the growing feelings I had for you

Comments 
windwitch says:   14 October 2007   956749  
Hard choice...I loved both of them! Hmmm, I guess I liked the second
on a little bit more. They were both very good! You are a great poet!
ZanyZeldaFan says:   14 October 2007   975796  
hmmmm... BOTH! XD ok serious answer, i liked the first one better.
the last line was hilarious! the other one has great meaning too, but
is a little sad.
Xiri says :   22 October 2007   265656  
Thx so much! =^_^= I really appreciate ur opinions

 
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