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Alone,we thought.Category: (general)
Thursday, 30 November 2006
07:08:02 PM (GMT)
Warning if u have a weak stomach DO NOT READ

One night five girls were having a sleep over when they heard chaos at the end of the
they crept down the street quietly and listened to what was going on,when they
learned that a woman
was raped and the perp was still on the loose they ran back to the house and bolted
everything down as best as they could.
Everything was fine when they heard noises outside,their minds went wild,they all ran
upstairs and hid quietly in a closet.The man was banging on the window part of the
door,then suddenly,they heard a big shatter.They all were crying.They heard him
pounding up the stairs,suddenly the closet door sung open and a man was standing
there holding a knife.They all ran down stairs but he caught the 5th girl,dragged her
by her long brunette hair into the bathroom.The other 4 girls locked themselves in a
cellar right under the bathroom.They heard the screams of the girl being raped and
then skinned alive.That night they heard their best friend dying and wouldn't do
anything but cry and listen,they heard her moaning in greif,they heard her scratching
at the door wanting out,but didn't do anything.
 The next morning,when the man had fled,they went to the bathroom to see their best
friend dead.They also saw a message carved in blood: How could u let me die?:they
looked up to hold back their tears and saw the knife that killed her on the ceiling
with the remaining flesh dangling from the knife.

            The End

RedHalo says:   10 December 2006   775452  
that was so gross but entertaining
‹♥Star_Dust♥› says:   17 December 2006   557323  
omg!!!!!! wow!!!! I'm shocked good talent
magstherag cries:   1 January 2007   797613  
what the heck!!!!!
Islandgirl says:   14 July 2007   273991  
OMG. Is that true or made up?
tiff1819 says:   15 July 2007   552588  
thats sacry.and very sad
‹Puppeh.› says:   15 July 2007   531519  
Wow thats pretty deep, and scary.. I hate the feeling of bad things
like that happening,who could live with their selves doing such a
sinful thing.You are a very good writer.
purpledove writes:   18 July 2007   449613  
ty...its made up......i wrote it just after i heard about a man
raping and killing 2 of his 5 children all girls...
cupid360 says:   9 August 2007   621753  
bad ending....
‹envyismyyname› says:   13 August 2007   126579  
i like that story though
purpledove says :   15 August 2007   484454  
why iz it a bad ending???next time i write a story like that ill make
sure u die in it ok?


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