ummmn, where to start....ok!! chapter 1 of....ummmn, eylids shut I
guess....wait no, make that prologue..
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ummmn, where to start....ok!! chapter 1 of....ummmn, eylids shut I
guess....wait no, make that prologue..
Category: story time!!
Wednesday, 8 April 2009
08:50:28 PM (GMT)
ok, like most things, I was sleeping, then I had a weird out of this world dream,
confusing as well as inspiring....

I was in a shower room, white tiles, silver fixtures, rusty drain in the centre. I
was standing there, not naked, in one of those one peice 
skin tight suits, purple with no insignia on it what so ever.
I walk out of it, through a glass door to a sleek room ,think alien, then think
average overcrowded shopping centre and then stick a big statue of a guy in black
armour, helmet and cape in the centre.It was packed with other people from acrossed
the globe, but I noticed something. All seemed like me, a direct link to everyone.
Different colours for different nations, as if we were to become part of a sporting
event, I had changed as I meandered over to a group of purples, I saw myself in a
mirrored refection of one of the plastic advertising signs, this for some red charge
energy drink. I had changed to my imaginary self, the inner me...
"awesome" I remarked.
 A tall woman in black one peice suit aproched me, arm at her hip with a clockwork
device. There were only a few black suited people here, the all seemed to be like
that.she began talking into a headset, speaking what seemed to be
german/russian/italian and a few select dialects from the tribes of the amazon...

I woke up, drew this woman, looked at the clock and decided to get up.
Enter my normal day, get up, drink tea, shower teeth, donn the restraining monkey
suit the school forces me to wear...
downstairs, in our terraced house in a forgotten suburb of england. I sit at our
failed attempt to modrenise the house, eating a bowl of generic cereal, a bland start
to a monday...
Last edited: 9 April 2009

Archon says:   9 April 2009   811244  
ok, it's a bit sketchy, and random, and has Loooads of spelling
I just wanna know what you think of the plot, thats all...
‹Maria   ;♥› says :   18 April 2009   454336  
Very great description on the whole outline of the story.
It makes sense, and it's better than most stories on here, truth.
I like how you can make a simple outlook on life sound so complex.
And as for the constructive critisizm; not too keen on the grammar.

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