Thursday, 5 March 2009
03:02:21 AM (GMT)
well i made chapter 1 of a first book witch is almost done but i wanted to write
this before i forgot and i am going for a 3rd person view point so plz coment and
enjoy may i remined u that this is a rough dtraft so dont get into that better
grammer stuff ok sry here u go
Jackson was a sleep in his bed. He was dreaming a terrible dream of
death. All he has seen all who have died he awoke. The 72 year old got up shaken. He
walked to the next room. The man grabed a safe and opened it using the combonation.
He grabed his 357 loaded a shot in it. The man shudderd took three breaths then put a
round in his head. The old man fell over in a puddle of his own blood.
A military station way deep in woyoming 0700 hours
Pvt. James Jackson woke from his slumber breathing hard he could tell
something was wrong. Sargent opened the door
"Get up you maggots and get something to eat remember tomarrow your
goin to Iraq." He said
James moaned and got out of bed. He got his clothes on then walked to
the mess. When he arrived he got a tray and walked down the line. There were
something that looked like eggs for breakfast. James grabbed the meal even though he
didn't want it.
He grabed some and took a bite of it. It seemed like powder as the
dry eggs crumpled in his mouth. He made a wierd face and pushed his tray away from
him. Sargent walked by.
"Eat you magget you can use the strength." Sargent said then walked
James pulled the plate up and stomached some food down. Across the
table at the other end was Helicopter pilot Jenny Dens. The girl of his dreams. He
stared at her blankly with dreamy eyes. She looked at him. Immediatly he turned to
look at his plate. Then he said to himself "Someday." Then he went back to eating his
When he was done everyone had to run 5 miles to be ready for the next
day. When he was done he went back to camp. He sat down on his bunk breathing deeply.
A man walked in it was Commader. James immediatly stood and took a salute.
"Ease up Private." The commader said
" Sir yes sir." James said
They both took a seat.
"Your grandfather is dead they found him laying in a pool of blood
with a 357 next to him he killed himself." said the commander "He was a good man."
"Are you sure." said James in a quiet tone
"Yes." said the commander "im sorry"
"It was the saphines." James said "He always told me about them."
"Your grandfather was crazy check the files you will see nothing the
goverment knows of the story he told and they confirmed it wasn't true." said the
Commander "Get your act together you will be in the front lines soon." Then he walked
James took a while to think what if those storys werent true he
5 hours later
James went to his bunk. Deep down in side he wanted to cry but he
couldn't. He fell asleep. The next day he awoke got his gear. Went on a boat and was
being shiped over seas