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Monday, 11 December 2006
11:26:51 PM (GMT)
CHAPTER 1         THE APPEARANCE 
MOM I'M GOING EXPLORING"screamed sarah to her mom.As sarah goes out of site she hears
her mom in a fade whisper"be back sooooooon."
           As sarah is looking through the bushes,up the trees and all of a sudden
she sees a black figure in the corner of her eye.She turns her head to see what it
was but she saw nothing,so she looks back.She gets torn down to the growned like a
500lb brick.The last thing she saw was a black figure that went strait through her
soal and knocked her out.

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cookiepoo2 says:   11 December 2006   839997  
that is very descriptive
patgirlric1993 says:   11 December 2006   359997  
thanx
SPORTYCHIK says:   11 December 2006   337815  
that was good
patgirlric1993 says:   11 December 2006   912999  
thanx again please keep reading as i go on ok
cutafull95 says:   11 December 2006   321891  
hmm...very deep, and very good! You have some potential!
patgirlric1993 says:   11 December 2006   937551  
thanx dont you all worry it will get creepier
kimmiko16 says:   12 December 2006   641983  
wat do you mean it went through her soul?other than that it was good
patgirlric1993 says:   12 December 2006   238266  
you'll see later what the thing cann do MUCH worse
kimmiko16 says:   12 December 2006   284481  
ok well make it fast =]
patgirlric1993 says:   12 December 2006   321735  
OK i'll try
patgirlric1993 says:   12 December 2006   172663  
by the way ppls this is ch.1 part 1
MrHello says:   12 December 2006   635541  
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!
patgirlric1993 says:   12 December 2006   536433  
ty........................
supertori11 asks:   12 December 2006   816827  
pls read mine people mine really discriptive and mine srry to say way
longer than hers
patgirlric1993 says:   12 December 2006   795656  
whos mine is a stoy it will be bigger
hershey105 says:   12 December 2006   663389  
that's a very good story
patgirlric1993 says:   12 December 2006   915175  
ITS NOT OVER YET
coolcat101 says:   14 December 2006   111145  
that was great!
patgirlric1993 says :   14 December 2006   789223  
tanx read ch 1 part 2 its better

 
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