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A story of us all. Get your word out.Category: Share your story
Saturday, 9 December 2006
06:46:50 AM (GMT)
This is a story of not just real events told by me but of you as well. Part one

...in the muddy streets in the small town I run through the darkness. I'm up to my
knees in water and my energy is running out. The voices are still close by and when I
look back their flashlights are shakingly searching through the rain. The moon is
growing bigger and bigger as I run. When the street comes to an end i slip on the
sidewalk edge and bash my chin into the ground. I quickly get up and notice that I am
not were I thought I would be. Before me I see....

Now you tell the 2nd part. say it as a comment or message me. remember it has to
follow along with what happens here and I will post it myself (with the name of the
current author.)

Alyson_96 says:   9 December 2006   426586  
..I saw the gang running after me. I got up and kept running. Then,
this baker opened the door and pulled me inside saying, "She's mine!".
The gang got nervous and ran. "What are you doing to me?" I asked
frighteningly. "Saving you," he smiled. "you didn't expect me to let
you get beat up by them, did ya?" I smiled back at him. Who knew he
would save me one day..
hereIride says:   9 December 2006   983865  
thanks its good
PiefaceXP says:   10 December 2006   121412  
see your doing it again!
commenting on your diary!
migod you r such a hypocrit!
n it was crap tbh.
Alygirl52 says:   31 December 2006   398278  
PiefaceXP! You SHOULD comment on your own journal! If you don't like
it, GO AWAY!!!!! You are frankly getting on my nerves!
Alygirl52 says:   31 December 2006   226628  
.........He Handed me a sugar muffin as he noticed how thin I was.
YUMMY! When I was full of sweets the man brought me to the back and
cleaned up the scrape on my chin. I had almost forgotten it with the
sight of the crumbling muffin placed in the palm of his big hand. I
excepted his genorousity but soon after I had to leave. Besides how
would I complete my mission if I stayed? I thanked him and carfully
moved back into the alley making sure I stayed in the shadows so
nobody would see me. 
           As I made my way across the street and into the forest, I
decided to stop and check my supplies before I exited town. All the
objects were in my bag. I had my blanket, knife, cup, matches, and a
cookie I had brought along with me. 
          I kept on and soon came to a lake. As I bent down to wash
the swet off of my face I saw a shimmer deep in the lake. At first I
thought it was a fish but then, as a glanced farther into the muddy
deep water I saw something that changed my life forever. I saw, a
hershey105 says:   6 January 2007   958728  
I saw a woman. She was smiling and staring down at
me. "hello," she said. "I'm Nora. I am here to help you.
"Huh?" I asked. I looked around and saw a giant castle.
"Why am I here?" "Well," Nora started. "We need you."
"You can finish the mission." What?" I asked another
question. She told me I would have o go to the castle
if I wanted to live. I did what she told me,and was 
captured. "Help!!" i screeamed as they took me into
a room,knowing that I would never be seen again. 
                      THE END
hershey105 says:   6 January 2007   685696  
ooops!!!!!! sorry. i thought everyone was making
up their own and not folowwing along with the
other comments. my mistake.
Tomboy400 says:   6 January 2007   153846  
The large figure approached I opened my mouth to scream then a hand
came infront of my face "Need a hand?" a voice said its that perect
voice that only comes froom a cute guy"Yea." I said tookand his hand
it was smooth and warm his nails were well groomed "What town is this
?"he asked me calmly after I awsered he thanked me and asked if you
need a ride"Yes." I said Quickly.A few hours later I was kissing Jake
for that was his name the other men were guys who were locals in the
town tring to find a dog.                       THE END
Tomboy400 says :   6 January 2007   983827  
or is it...


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