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This is really lame... I wrote it a long time ago.Category: (general)
Saturday, 8 January 2011
07:48:44 PM (GMT)
I don't need your shoulder. 
All I need is for you to get older.
What happened?
You keep getting colder and colder.
Just go home.

When you're the cause of tears;
why would I need you to wipe them way?
I've grown up a million times for you.
Is it your turn soon?

Just leave.

I suppose it was abvious.
That along a damn wasn't given.
Don't try to lie; I've seen it a hundred times.
To believe any difference would come was insane.

Walk away. 

You're breaking my heart, slowly,
Ever so slowly. 
What's wrong with you?

Prescription says:   15 January 2011   851474  
This is good.
A lot of kindling for a fire here!
You're one of the better amateur poets on here.

Try to make it flow better, it just makes the poem feel like melted
chocolate on your tongue.

And toss in a metaphor or twoo!
‹Plainly and simply - Ham.(=› says:   15 January 2011   949111  
This is one of my more shitty poems... 
I have better ones... Much better ones... I just found this and
decided to post it.

Thank for the feedback I suppose.
Prescription says:   15 January 2011   929766  
Well, do share?
Perhaps I'll show one of mine. C:?
‹Plainly and simply - Ham.(=› says:   15 January 2011   310033  
There are a few before this... but I have better ones than those too.
They're just closer to the heart I guess.
Prescription says:   15 January 2011   980872  
Ahh, I understand perfectly. I have about a hundred I won't share
with people actually... Haha. xD

Will look. C:
‹Plainly and simply - Ham.(=› says:   15 January 2011   690813  
Hah, it takes me alot of courage to post poems on here...

And do what cha please.
Prescription says:   15 January 2011   225989  
I don't even post mine.
Most people don't get em' anyway.

I've read them before it seems xD

Want me to message you one of mine perhaps? 
‹Plainly and simply - Ham.(=› says :   15 January 2011   175079  
Yeah, sure. I will certainly read them... or it. :D


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