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Wrote a new song last night, any ideas on how to make it better?Category: (general)
Tuesday, 17 July 2007
05:55:42 AM (GMT)
Not Good Enough For Hell:

Ribs crushing, lungs bursting
From your bearhug of death
I could see it in your eyes
You never really cared less
I felt you grin in my ear
And then you whispered
I never did love you
And you will never love again

This vice arond my heart
It tightens everyday
Breaking slowly to a million pieces
And when its over
I'll sit and stare at this hell that you created
And for a minute I will pretend that its bliss

That last look
The one of total disgust and hate
It tore my heart in two
I thought that I would die alone for sure
But then my hero
Not one in shining armour
Came along and told me I would nver be alone
Ignore those who tell you lies and more

This vice around my heart
It tightens everyday
Breaking slowly into a million pieces
And when its over
I will sit and stare at this hell that you created
And for a minute I will pretend that its bliss

You think your games are all that matter
But I'm stronger and I'm better
Than you first thought
Your mistake will cost you dearly
ETERNAL DAMNATION
And no more hearts with which to toy
So come on, STAND UP!
And stop acting like some little boy

This vice around my heart
It tightens everyday
Breaking slowly into a million pieces
And when its over
I'll sit and stare at this hell that you created
And for a minute I will pretend that its bliss

But one thing you taught me
This pain wont last forever
The vice will disappear
And my heart can be stuck back together
I will never be dependant
I can stand on my own
So thanks for the poison
I'll wash it down WITH THE BLOOD FROM YOUR THROAT!!

By Adele xoxo

Comments 
Goldielaux wonders:   17 July 2007   267533  
wow.....um. kinda, oh i dunno, DEPRESSING????
saralyn247 says :   17 July 2007   697769  
feeling dark today?
 

 
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