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the other poem I wroteCategory: Poems
Wednesday, 2 April 2014
09:12:53 PM (GMT)
She came to me
An angel so bright
She helped me out
Of my eternal night

Ready to give in
To the lonely ways
My heart so scarred
Throughout all of my days

Healing began
Slow but it hastened
Soon I loved more
My heart to her fastened

Beauty behold
The angel sits here
Only us two
Right then and only there

There were others
I was quite aware
My angel though
Gave not a single care

We kissed right then
Not wanting to stop
Wishing I hadnt
my head about to pop

For a whole year
I had thought of this
Her lips soft warm
Feeling absolute bliss

I forced the end
My angel displeased
But scared I was
It needed to be ceased

Forever joyed
About that moment
But life was not
Be gone this monument

We were happy
All before schooling
Then we crumbled
My angel hard stressing

She felt horrible
That she wasnt good
Built up pressure
Stored inside her own hood

Her head confused
Tossed between two things
Be With the saved
Go against her heart strings

Strong as she is
It was not enough
Her heart strings snapped
It was so very rough

I clung too hard
No time to adjust
She had the right
To let us turn to rust

I was her first
She needed the time
But I pushed hard
In the wound I squeezed lime

She stung she hurt
But I squeezed some more
She then gave in
Her heart from me she tore

I loved her well
Or so I had thought
But in excess
The ending I had bought

I am glad though
She can now focus
Her future bright
Our future just hocus

Though the pain I now feel
I still care a great deal
Last edited: 25 July 2014

Jessy_Singer_482 says:   15 April 2014   638287  
Wow that's really emotional xx
Abibliophobia says:   15 April 2014   392288  
This is really good 
curtntay says :   15 April 2014   164907  
thanks to you both, based on Edgar Allan Poe and experience of my own


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