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This diary entry is written by Kevy_the_snootz. ( View all entries )

Work it outCategory: good song i wrote (=
Tuesday, 10 February 2009
12:04:11 PM (GMT)
what is the world
gonna do about the word
i took your words nd i made em into a poem
i believed in everythin you told me

i couldnt believe how u would lie to me
i'm sitting here crying over you
slitting wrists
nd beggin you to stay
damn, cant you stay in one place
theres only one place for me

we can work it out
i promise no more fighting
i'll do everything you'll say
i'll get you everything anything u want
you know i'm your everything
nd if i cant then i  guess i'm not your everything

we can work it out
we can
i'm sure we can
i cant let you go
just please stay with me
i promise you i'll work with you
as long as you hold on please
work it out
strengthen up
between in and out

<b thanks for listening i wrote this song 
i called this song "work it out"

CrazyCute1129 says:   13 February 2009   295587  
you need more verses,but so far ur getting good,you should keep
working on this and can turn out to be one of da best songs yet  :D
ha. Ohh and make the verses longer..this should take us 5 minz to read
not 30 secondz :P
Kevy_the_snootz says :   15 February 2009   977474  
:P haha thanks 4 the advise


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