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A story called:Pretty Soldier(A Beautiful Story)Category: Love!!!
Wednesday, 11 July 2007
09:12:19 PM (GMT)
I am making a story about a little girl and a handsome pegasus.
This story takes place in Tokyo,Japan.
The little girl meets pegasus in a dream.
Pegasus tells Rini,to not tell anyone that they met.Rini's noisy sister is always in
her buisiness,
and ask what she thinks about.
This is the first chapter:
The whole city of Tokyo is asleep,but things
change in Rini's dream...

"Our world is weaping,if you can hear me,my name is pegasus."
Rini starts walking around and suddenly she sees a beautiful,white hore.
"Where am I,is that a horse?It's beautiful!"Rini walks to the
horse amazingly.
"Please don't tell anyone we met."The horse says.
Rini reaches out her hand and tries to touch the horse,but he dissapears.
"Hey!Where did you go?"
Before he answers,Rini's sister,Nicole wakes her up.
"WAKE UP!!!You have to get ready for shcool!"Rini wakes up
wondering where she is."Where is the dream?"
Nicole walks downstairs.Rini is getting up thinking about pegasus in her dream.
`I wonder if pegasus is real?But i promised to not tell anyone we met.
Yeah,keep it to my self.`
Rini and Nicole walk out of the door and head for school.
"So,what were ya dreamin' about?"nicole ask noisyly.
"Rini sighs.
"Nothing.....why?Its none of your buisness anyway!!!"Rini
walks away to school.

Hope you like my story!!
Here the japaneese version of the ending:

This version is better!

riveranna says:   11 July 2007   134259  
Its Good But Tip:Read it Over and Over Intil You Know the Stroy By
Heart It Makes it Feel Like a better Read ^_^
XxFabolousxX says:   11 July 2007   221251  
gehttothug says:   11 July 2007   991493  
this is gehttothug want to be friends
gehttothug says:   11 July 2007   176984  
ur girl is hot!!!!!
XxFabolousxX says :   11 July 2007   314768  
This is a good tip:The version below is differfent from the one up
top.So click both vids at the same time but turn the top video volume
down.It would make it the REAL version.


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