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A song I wrote =] It's not that great but, I tried =/

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A song I wrote =] It's not that great but, I tried =/

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Friday, 21 August 2009
01:23:08 PM (GMT)

!COPYRIGHT!
It's not the greatest =/ But i tried Uhmmm... 
well leave  comment leaving your honest opinon=] 
Idc if you say it sucks I'm fine with that ... 
Just tell me what I can change/ Or do better =]
Thank you,
Jessica 

SONG STARTS NOW!


Can you see me?
Do you know me? 
Can you ever give a sign?

I am empty
Can you listen?
Or just take a look inside.

Chours:
Cause I'm there 
When your there
Come on see me
just stare.

Cause I feel alone 
In this world.
Come on take me
Lets get away from her.

Cause she not good for you.
I'm good for you 
Yeah.

And then I'll fall into your arms 
and we'll run
and you'll take me away.

__
Cause do you know what its like -
to be left in the dark.
Do dream of some light-
where your his shining star.

To be taken' away 
On this fairtail ride..
I'll let you decide.

Chours:

Last edited: 21 August 2009

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Comments

qtjulie says:

21 August 2009 177299

i lubb itt omg how did u capture dat feeling i bin tryin 2 do dat wit
poems but i can't

HAHAHAHA - 3 June 2010

Tini_Jess says:

21 August 2009 359832

Well i just had that feeling so i just let all my feelings run on
paper. I was in math class actually =]

A song I wrote =] It's not that great but, I... - 21 August 2009

TyransEditingPage says:

21 August 2009 357271

Dats good yo. You got a talent. Check out my page and tell me if your
interested.

Tini_Jess says:

21 August 2009 635783

Alright thank you very much =]

A song I wrote =] It's not that great but, I... - 21 August 2009

‹The Stephh Misson District ™› says:

21 August 2009 447726

I like it
Its coz good meaning 
xx

hmmm - 5 February 2010

Tini_Jess says:

21 August 2009 573374

Lol thank you i realized tht alot of ppl can relate to it! =]

A song I wrote =] It's not that great but, I... - 21 August 2009

‹♥Daniel'sLova♥› says:

21 August 2009 955169

That's really good!!!!!I once wrote a song and put it on here, but I
think mine like sucks!!

Deathnote Yaoi - 31 January 2010

Tini_Jess says:

21 August 2009 538371

Lol thank you very much! and i dont think it would suck, is it still
on here?

A song I wrote =] It's not that great but, I... - 21 August 2009

XxMirandaxX says:

21 August 2009 963769

i like the song

Tini_Jess says:

21 August 2009 134245

Thank you =]

A song I wrote =] It's not that great but, I... - 21 August 2009

‹Shæ♥› says:

21 August 2009 761265

I like it. c:

Tini_Jess says:

21 August 2009 544887

Haha! thanks =]

A song I wrote =] It's not that great but, I... - 21 August 2009

BrookelleMarina_luves_you_I_think sings:

23 August 2009 657272

That is a Fantastic song! I mean that could be on the Radio! Ha are
we aloud to suggest things for you to write like song whise? All i
want to say is that you should be a songwriter, bc alot of people can
probley relate to that song!
Well Done!

Tini_Jess says :

23 August 2009 644697

Wow! well i dont think it's that good uhmm, well thank you very much
and sure you guys can ask me to write a song about certian things =]
well thank you very much everyone

A song I wrote =] It's not that great but, I... - 21 August 2009

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