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A song I wrote =] It's not that great but, I tried =/Category: (general)
Friday, 21 August 2009
01:23:08 PM (GMT)
It's not the greatest =/ But i tried Uhmmm... 
well leave  comment leaving your honest opinon=] 
Idc if you say it sucks I'm fine with that ... 
Just tell me what I can change/ Or do better =]
Thank you,


Can you see me?
Do you know me? 
Can you ever give a sign?

I am empty
Can you listen?
Or just take a look inside.

Cause I'm there 
When your there
Come on see me
just stare.

Cause I feel alone 
In this world.
Come on take me
Lets get away from her.

Cause she not good for you.
I'm good for you 

And then I'll fall into your arms 
and we'll run
and you'll take me away.

Cause do you know what its like -
to be left in the dark.
Do dream of some light-
where your his shining star.

To be taken' away 
On this fairtail ride..
I'll let you decide.

Last edited: 21 August 2009

qtjulie says:   21 August 2009   177299  
i lubb itt omg how did u capture dat feeling i bin tryin 2 do dat wit
poems but i can't
Tini_Jess says:   21 August 2009   359832  
Well i just had that feeling so i just let all my feelings run on
paper. I was in math class actually =]
TyransEditingPage says:   21 August 2009   357271  
Dats good yo. You got a talent. Check out my page and tell me if your
Tini_Jess says:   21 August 2009   635783  
Alright thank you very much =]
‹The Stephh Misson District ™› says:   21 August 2009   447726  
I like it
Its coz good meaning 
Tini_Jess says:   21 August 2009   573374  
Lol thank you i realized tht alot of ppl can relate to it! =]
‹♥Daniel'sLova♥› says:   21 August 2009   955169  
That's really good!!!!!I once wrote a song and put it on here, but I
think mine like sucks!!
Tini_Jess says:   21 August 2009   538371  
Lol thank you very much! and i dont think it would suck, is it still
on here?
XxMirandaxX says:   21 August 2009   963769  
i like the song
Tini_Jess says:   21 August 2009   134245  
Thank you =]
‹Shæ♥› says:   21 August 2009   761265  
I like it. c:
Tini_Jess says:   21 August 2009   544887  
Haha! thanks =]
BrookelleMarina_luves_you_I_think sings:   23 August 2009   657272  
That is a Fantastic song! I mean that could be on the Radio! Ha are
we aloud to suggest things for you to write like song whise? All i
want to say is that you should be a songwriter, bc alot of people can
probley relate to that song!
Well Done!
Tini_Jess says :   23 August 2009   644697  
Wow! well i dont think it's that good uhmm, well thank you very much
and sure you guys can ask me to write a song about certian things =]
well thank you very much everyone


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