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Wednesday, 8 July 2009
04:46:11 PM (GMT)
Commit suicide

im in my room
in darkness
and cold
im thinking of comitting suicide

im always alone
and never having any fun
im thinking of commiting suicide

i run away from home
im nowhere to be found
im thinking of committing suicide

i have the knife in my hand
and this note in the other
im thinking of committing suicide

now that im alone
with the knife to my chest
im about to commit suicide

i say my last words
'this was fate and goodbye'
im about to commit suicide

i have my last breath
and im now dead
i have just committed suicide

blueangel180 says:   13 July 2009   614818  
i'm guessing it's just a poem
is it?
‹Avada Kedavra♥› says:   13 July 2009   885174  
Oh w0w 
There's a lot of emotion in that..
Love it!
allyraptor says :   20 November 2011   151720  
Hmm. I would like to see a bit more variation. I like the
repetitiveness of the word suicide but it needs more simplicity and
emotion. More vividness. I do like the general idea though.


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