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The little Orphan chapter 1Category: The little orphan story
Saturday, 14 June 2008
01:36:18 PM (GMT)
The moon shown over New York City in November of 1995, despite the heavy rain pounding the streets and buildings. The cloudy sky opened up to let the moon shine through high above the skyscrapers. Not many drivers risked driving in the cold falling water, for the weather forecast on the radios and TV's mentioned hail, and even snow. Puddles formed along the worn sidewalks and streets, and nobody dared go outside. Well, almost nobody. Footsteps echoed around the near empty streets, as a woman wearing a light brown cloak ran like a lost dog. She carefully held a newborn wrapped in a woolen blanket as she searched the building names for the one she was looking for. The words were in a language unfamiliar to her, but she had a piece of paper holding the word she was looking for in the right language. ORPHANAGE. She got someone she met to write it for her; the man looked at her like she was crazy, or stupid. But she had the paper and was trying to match the lettering to the lettering on the buildings. Her child slept content in her arms, not bothered by the rain. The mother searched frantically on the buildings, but couldn't find a match. She soon made it to a brick building, old and worn. The steps were made of concrete, and had an awning over the door. She ran under the awning to escape the rain. A cardboard box was to her right, and a bronze sign on the wall to her left. She looked at it, cradling her daughter. She saw some familiar lettering. Orphanage. She compared the paper she had to the sign; they definitely matched. She took a large envelope from her cloak, and pulled the cardboard box in front of the strong wooden doors. The mother carefully placed the child in the box, trying her best not to wake her. She then placed the envelope beside her, and looked up to the door, showing her deep blue eyes. She clenched her hand in a fist and held it to knock. Something held her hand away; the thought of leaving her newborn daughter at a place where parent-less children stayed. She didn't want her to grow up thinking she had no parents, But she brought herself to banging on the solid doors. She then quickly went down the stairs, careful not to slip. She hid out of sight, waiting to see if someone would answer. The door opened after about ten seconds, and she could see a little girl, no more then two years old, answer. She had short pink hair, hazel eyes and was wearing a long nightgown. She saw her daughter right away. "Auntie! Come here!" She called to an older woman in the building. An elderly woman soon appeared and saw the baby, and brought her in without haste. Knowing her child was safe, the mother ran off into the streets of New York, hoping not to be seen there again. The elderly woman held the girl, abandoned by a mother. The girl at her leg tugged on her nightgown. "Auntie, why is the baby all alone?" "Well, Sera, sometimes parents can't take care of their child, or don't want them, so they give them to orphanages so we can take care of them." "That's sad. Who'd leave their baby alone, especially in the rain?" "I don't know, Sera, but I'm sure she had a good reason." Sera didn't say any more, but ran off to her room. She was going to arrange a room for the girl, when she noticed an envelope in the box. She carefully bent down and picked it up. It had a large bulk in it; it probably had something inside of it. She opened it, and pulled out the paper in it. It was written poorly, as if written by a child, but it was indeed written by an adult. She had trouble distinguishing the words, but soon made it out. For reasons beyond my control, I can't take care of my daughter. Please, take good care of her. She has a bright future ahead of her. Her name is Mana Futabatei. She was born on November 2, '95. Make sure she get's the package in the envelope. She pulled out what was in the envelope. It was a disassembled flute. The flute shone brightly in the dim light, and it didn't feel like it was metal. When she assembled it, she saw that on the mouthpiece was ignitials in a fancy font. M.F. It must've been expensive to make this for her. It's such good quality, and the engraving wasn't done cheaply either. She took the note, the flute and the girl, now known as Mana, to Sera's room. Since a boy was recently adopted, there was still a spare crib. When she opened the door, she looked at Sera's gleaming eyes. "Auntie?" "Sera, she's going to be staying in your room. You don't mind, do you?" "Not at all! What's her name?" "Mana." "What a nice name." Sera took a look at Mana, laying in the crip. She already had a thick head of black hair, and her eyes shone deep blue. "Don't worry, Mana. I'll be here to take care of you."
Last edited: 29 June 2009

Comments 
‹Ashe_Amu› says:   14 June 2008   697691  
this is great
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   14 June 2008   567749  
thanks ashe. chapter two is coming up as well. but i need more
charactors T.T including that special one.
 
lilyrules says:   14 June 2008   313427  
wow kool story so far!!!
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   15 June 2008   654734  
thanks lily 
 
Mashiro says:   15 June 2008   294145  
Wow, it's beautiful ;3; Great story, I love it, very descriptive.
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   16 June 2008   118259  
thanks  i enjoy writing it.
 
‹SqueeneyTodd› says:   16 June 2008   936355  
Yay! You used Sera! Great story so far. To the next chapter!
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   16 June 2008   643921  
yes i used sera! i liked her character design/profile 
 
MeepingMeep says:   18 June 2008   685867  
I likes ITZ!
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   18 June 2008   942472  
thanks yous meep 
 
lilyrules says:   19 June 2008   982636  
u r such a good story writer!!im writing a story it's called "the
orphanges dream"!
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   19 June 2008   638119  
i'll check it out lily 
 
lilyrules says:   19 June 2008   767232  
can u message me with some tips for the story please!!i added u to my
friends list.and my story took place 1993!
lilyrules says:   19 June 2008   759419  
i did not write it on kupika but i will on saturday!!
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   19 June 2008   819691  
O.O one year earlier them my beginning XD ok i will try to think of
some tips.
 
machidagirl says:   21 June 2008   934267  
omg wow!
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   21 June 2008   829376  
 all this on one chapter. wait until you read the rest XD
 
Kirti says:   3 July 2008   265661  
I see why they wouldn't fit now. but that's great!
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   3 July 2008   873291  
lol don't worry and thx 
 
‹{☜☏☞}› says:   7 July 2008   224342  
It's great!
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   7 July 2008   846132  
thank you 
 
‹Megaman› says:   23 July 2008   379629  
this is good
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   23 July 2008   391658  
Thank you 
 
Sophie_96 says:   12 August 2008   483843  
It needs more action
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   12 August 2008   821247  
It's only the first chapter :|
 
Warriors_Fanatic_101 says:   22 August 2008   371753  
Wow that blew my mind away... It kinda reminds me of Meet The
Robertsons. Bravo, it is Fantastic! I like the description!
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   22 August 2008   962189  
Thank you!
Meet the Robinsons?
*ponders*
I see what you mean...maybe I did get some inspiration from it...
 
mya123467809 says:   22 August 2008   588711  
I loved it wat inspired u to write it
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   22 August 2008   198182  
I dunno. I just felt the writing it.
 
Kirti says:   24 August 2008   279781  
well.... don't stop! please keep writing it!! until the end...
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   24 August 2008   934342  
I will! Don't worry! <--partially lying cuz she's procrastinating
GAH! Stupid arrow! *gets Sword of Mist from the story* DIE ARROW!
 
Kirti says:   26 August 2008   838244  
heheh. KILL DA ARROW!

procrastinating isn't the same as quiting.
I love the arrow thing! I use it all the time!<--using arrow.
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   26 August 2008   227822  
xD
You're the reason I use it now xD
I know it isn't, but I hate having to make people wait. But I'm having
trouble focusing on the chapters D: mostly because i'm too obsessed
with Rock Band <-- just got it and doesn't get to play often
 
‹??????› says:   5 September 2008   377522  
Whoa, this is good! No, its beyond great!!! <333
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   5 September 2008   782265  
xD Thank you very much!
You have oekaki's, I have storywriting :D
Read the rest of it too :D
 
Kirti says:   27 September 2008   865536  
oh jeez. What do I have? <--loser

Oh noes it's a 1/4 life crisis!!
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   27 September 2008   387119  
eh? Sorry, you threw me off.
 
Kirti says:   28 September 2008   286789  
well you said...

on second thought nvm, I was rambling.
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   28 September 2008   658589  
oh ok lol
 
Rin_Sohma says:   8 January 2009   493818  
o ya right if there's 1 thing i know about NYC it's that the streets
are never silent. it's not for nothing they call it "the city
that never sleeps".

could Cloak-Lady make people shut up like dumbledor and the put-outer?
That'd be so cool! (I luv Harry Potter!)
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   8 January 2009   386427  
Yeah, I don't know much about New York, apparently. ^^;

Hmm... (Thinking: O_o)
 
‹Joanna;FinallySetHerselfFree♥› says:   1 May 2009   259489  
YAY! This is cool! (this is actually me reading it for the first
time, so well done, this is good! x)
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   1 May 2009   594982  
Really? O_o
 
‹♥GoddessOfAnime♥› says:   8 May 2009   797753  
Thats awsome. You should make it into a book!
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   9 May 2009   487469  
That's what I plan to do once it's done. ^^
 
Kirti says:   7 July 2009   379427  
Haha, nothing stops traffic in America! Except maybe in very
rural places where children drive riding lawn mowers to school. Nice
changes though.

The only thing I don't get is if someone wrote "ORPHANAGE" on the
paper and the sign said "Orphanage", how could she read it? "R, r",
"G, g", "E,e". Some of the letters look very differnt in lowercase...
 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   7 July 2009   343338  
This is a special case then. :]

Oh yeah, oops. I'll change that when I can be bothered.
 
Kirti says:   7 July 2009   175594  
I know that feeling.
 
blindwonder says:   5 August 2009   389424  
I don't think I've ever commented on this story, but I've read it and
you said you re-wrote the first chapter, so here I am.
I like it.
But the way Sera talks kind of confuses me. She doesn't really talk
like any two-year-old I know. But maybe that's just me.
 
purple_bubbles says:   6 September 2009   928867  
great
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says :   6 September 2009   712997  
Thanks, Wendy. ^_^
 

 
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