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Wednesday, 29 April 2009
09:43:07 PM (GMT)
what is the point?
why do i remain here alone?
why isn't he carrying me from the blue
why am i still in the dark
"I'm in love with you and i cant even stand it!"
that yell of pain does nothing
he's still walking away
"No! Don't leave me!"
another yell rumbles from my throat
my legs push on forward but it seems like every step i take 
im going away from him
"Taylor. Thank you for everything."
he says his bold voice echoing through my cries
"Don't leave me!"
i plea once more
"I'm suffering now because I had these ties!" 
he says suddenly gripping my shoulders
"Then take me with you....Dustin"
i cry holding his arms as his hands crush my shoulders
"I've lost everything once and I don't ever want to see it again"
he said hateful
"but i cant go on without you."
i say hurt
"well it's time to learn how. Starting now."
then he dissapears
he's gone and I'm here all alone
"I wont make it without you, Dustin"
i cry for the last time as the bullet hugs my broken heart

‹~Sheri'sBeautifulDisaster~› says:   29 April 2009   962752  
omg this is so sad and romantic this to me is real love dont lose him
‹Mallary :)› says:   29 April 2009   381895  
wow I am sorry
‹She'llFlyThatBlackHawkDown♥.› says:   29 April 2009   337958  
@ Guardian- yea thank you once again! yea that was jus a result of
having my dads coffee before bed (i allways have weird dreams when i
drink that stuff)

@Chocolover- thank you =) 
‹~Sheri'sBeautifulDisaster~› says:   30 April 2009   211246  
Coffee does weird things to the brain but if you wanna talk about
anything just message me
‹She'llFlyThatBlackHawkDown♥.› says:   30 April 2009   396698  
yea i would know. lol. yea sure, i know i can talk to you ^.^
‹~Sheri'sBeautifulDisaster~› says:   1 May 2009   482232  
so drink alot of coffee message me any time
‹She'llFlyThatBlackHawkDown♥.› says:   1 May 2009   187594  
lol that's wen i usually write good XD ok i will ^.^
batty_xd says:   2 May 2009   291873  
THis is a vry good poem....U must have a broken heart that cant be
fixed. But what will really shatter it is when he comes back asking
for ur love again....Love isnt always happy in fairytales. but
sometimes u just gotta take the risks and chances. He mite come back
and he mite not....U mite recover from ur broken hart or not....but
jst remembr u have alotta ppl on here who will help u and be behind u
ready to catch u....Guardian_Angel seems to care about u........I hope
Fate will come back to u and apoligize
‹She'llFlyThatBlackHawkDown♥.› says :   2 May 2009   546788  
wow thank you so much for your comment! my mom allways tells me that
love isnt love unless some1 gets hurt, and unfortunately, im the 1 who
got hurt this time around. i think it was harder for him because he
had a really ruff life before he left me and he jus wanted 2 move away
so he didnt hurt me like he did the rest of his girlfriends. and what
is in quotes is what we actually said, other then some minor
adjustments. he really didnt want to hurt me as bad as he did but he
knew in his heart that it was the only way i would let go. we still
talk tho so im getting better. and yes, Guardian is a wonderful friend
to me.


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