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Scary story (can you handle the sespense)Category: can u handle the sespense
Saturday, 25 April 2009
08:02:07 PM (GMT)
if you get scared easily then dont read. if you love sespense and blood then
procede. comment if you want more. enjoy.
reveiws Claire (horneyhorse333) says its scary and should be a book.
amanda (koolkittys sister) says its cool
jessica (koolkittys sister) says its scary and cool.
     The Longins family was moving to their new home south of nashville. They have
just moved from their hometown in california. Mrs. Longins found a small house south
of nashville, just a little ways away from town. They were driving in their mini-van,
their house straight ahead.
"so how are you kids feeling?" asked their dad as they pulled up in frony of their
house.
"Dad this place looks old and run down,"maria said with disappointment.
The house was 3 stories tall and the shingles on the roof were falling off. and the
two trees in the front yard were bent over and they formed an archway.
"well fix this place up in no time. well paint over it in the summertime."their
mother replied.they all stepped out of the car and opened the door to the house.
the door creaked as it slowly opened.
The inside of the house was suprisingly peaceful. the living room had a fireplace and
the dining room contained a shandalier. and with all their furniture in the house,
they had no choic but to live there.
"head up to your rooms. its getting late." their mother called from down the hall.
they sighed and went to their rooms.
the night passed by quickley and when morning approached, Marcus and Maria decided to
take a walk around the neighborhood.
They walked past old,dead trees about 3 blocks east from their house.
"so how do you feel about our....house?"maria asked warily.
"its okay but a little creepy "marcus replied.
they walked by a patch of bushes. then they could hear rustling."whats in
there?"maria asked as she hid behind her brother, she peered over his shoulder.
The noise came closer. it was heading towards them.
they saw something they never thought they would see.
*            *          *
It was a grey haired old man. he had yellow teeth and his breath stunk. it looked as
if he hasent eaten.....or bathed in weekes. his eyes were bright blue and curious. he
stood up straight. he looked about 5 feet. 2 inches taller then maria and an inch
taller then her brother.
"you kids live in that house 4 blocks down? he asked.
they shook their heads.
"leave that house at once!"he yelled.
they stood there frozen with fear.
"bad things happen at that house. bad and bloody things."
"what happens there" marcus asked without thinking.
'Murders. many many murders. the last couple that lived there were hanging from those
two trees.
and the next day their heads were missing and no one knew why?
"is that why those two trees in the front yard are bent over like that?" marcus
asked.
"yes"he said. "now leave that house at once!"
he lounged towards marcus and he threw him to the ground.
the old mans long nails cut threw his arm.
Maria tried to help her brother up but she wasnt strong enough.
She grabbed a tree branch from the side of the abandoned road and wacked tha man on
the side of the head. he lay there unconcious. this gave marcus a chance to get up.
they ran back to their house.
blood dripping from his arm and shock waves went up through his arm
they reached the house out of breath.
the day went by fast and then midnight appraoched.
Maria could hear the front door squeek open slowly, then close.
she shot straight up. she could hear footsteps approaching her room. loud fiitsteps.
then they stopped at the end of the hall.
ot was silent.
she rested her head back on the pillow and said, i was onlt imagining things.
then there was a high pitched scream coming from her parents room. then it ewent dead
silent.
marcus came burting throught thwe door shocked.
he moitioned maria to follow him. they stood in the doorway of their parents room.
evrything seemed okay. As it appeared to them. or was it?
*              *                 *

they stood at the door moitionless and quiet for a long moment. Maria walked next to
her mother. Nothing seemed to be wrong. then she uncoved her<not knowing what to
expect. Now that she was uncovered, she wished she wasnt.
blood, spread all over her silk night dress. and a gapeing whole threw her chest. Her
mothers eyes wide open staring at her. she never blinked. Marcus ran to marias side
and starred down at his mother in horror. then he rushed to his fathers side and
uncovered him. The same thing happened to him. Blood all over his night shirt, and a
gapeing hole threw his chest. But she eyes were blood shut.
Maria grabbed her mothers hand. the grip got tighter, and she wasnt doing it.
The grip of their intwined hands got tighter. and maria couldnt let go. and slowly
her mothers head turned. and starred at maria.
she screamed. and marcus ran out of the room. and he searched threw the drawers, and
found a large carving knife and ran back to the room. Marias screams got louder.
then, marcus did what he had to do.
*            *             *
TO BE CONTINUED
Last edited: 27 April 2009

Comments 
‹Yuushi› says:   25 April 2009   819239  
It's cool but it doesn't scare me ^.^
 
‹Funn_size› says:   27 April 2009   865525  
yah cause i aint finished yet! be patient pllllzzzz lol
 
‹wolfkid_hates_war› says:   28 April 2009   972446  
cool see my new website the url is
http://creativecats.synthasite.com/
 
‹Funn_size› says:   28 April 2009   496173  
awesome. ill check it out. tell me how i did so far on my story plz
 
‹wolfkid_hates_war› says:   28 April 2009   342679  
it's good do you want me to put it on my site
 
‹Funn_size› says:   29 April 2009   155954  
sure that would ba so sweet!
 
‹wolfkid_hates_war› says:   29 April 2009   196222  
wat do you want your member name to be
 
‹Cassidy916› says:   29 April 2009   872719  
that was kewl but kinda creppy but still cool 
kutos
 
‹Funn_size› says:   30 April 2009   113222  
my member name can be the same.

and thanx
 
‹wolfkid_hates_war› says:   30 April 2009   147539  
ok chk my site when you come back
 
‹wolfkid_hates_war› says:   30 April 2009   796291  
actually i will tell you when it's on there
 
‹wolfkid_hates_war› says:   30 April 2009   412488  
its now on the site if you wanna see
 
‹Funn_size› says:   2 May 2009   551683  
alright ill see it right.... now
 
MiniDemiLovatoFan says:   3 May 2009   218866  
that was the best scary story i read
 
‹Funn_size› says :   3 May 2009   696553  
awww thanx but it isnt finished yet......
 

 
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