Monday, 3 November 2008
06:26:31 PM (GMT)
You woke up before the sun came up. You had about an hour before the scorching heat
enveloped the desert. “Why did I come to this sand pit, I could have gone anywhere
else. Ryuu, you idiot, why didn’t you just turn around and head to that coast,”
you told yourself. You got up and began to dust yourself off. You were carrying your
sword, the Dragon Flame Sword, on your back. It was twice as long as your body, so it
was dragging in the sand. Any normal person would not be able to use it. But you were
not a normal person. When you were born a bloody war was raging, and the angry
spirits of the dead became a giant demon, a huge black dragon. Even after the war was
won, the dragon continued to kill innocent people, destroying village after village,
until it got to the village hidden in the Flames and Shadows, your village. No matter
how many shinobi attacked it, the demon barely took any damage. The leader of your
village was forced to seal it in you, giving you great strength and wisdom, along
with pitch black hair and blood-red eyes. You were, however, made an outcast because
the monster that was inside you killed so many innocents.
After your fifteenth birthday you had ran away from your village, becoming a
missing-nin. You could never return, so you went from village to village, learning
jutsu, until you arrived in the village hidden in the mist. There you trained with
the seven demon swordsmen, learning their techniques and jutsu until they found out
your secret. Then you were forced to flee again. Now you were leaving the village
hidden in the sand, you had chosen to leave the village before anyone found out your
secret. You had met Gaara, someone else who was possessed by a demon, and even
learned to use a sand shield, although you need tons of chakra to keep it up. You had
even learned how to use the powers of the demon inside you, you could channel it’s
chakra into your eyes, making them faster than the Sharingan and having more precise
vision than the Byakugan, but at a cost, if you used it for more than one hour you
would begin to go blind. You found this out by trial and error, you now had to wear
As the blistering heat enveloped the sand around you, you ran as fast as you can,
trying to get out of the sun. As you ran you began to see a city in the distance, you
suddenly noticed that your surroundings had changed, you were at a huge waterfall
with two statues on either side. “This must be that valley of the end that I heard
about, the place that the two shinobi, the two that founded the village hidden in the
leaves. I remember that the two founders of the village hidden in the flames and
shadows killed each other in that war.” You muttered.
The bloody war that was going on was started when the two leaders of your village,
one a master in flame jutsu and the other a shadow specialist, began to fight over
who would be the leader of the village. The shadow ninja was the one that defended
the village from it’s enemies, but the flame shinobi was the one who cleared the
land and worked. The flame shinobi knew she would not win on her own, she was not
strong enough, most of her army was killed by the demon. She was going to lose, so
she hid out, far from the village. She did not give up however, she was planning to
use the destructive power of the dragon to cause chaos. Then she and the remainder of
the ninja loyal to her would attack and seize control. She planned to use you as a
weapon, hoping that if he could control you she could control the power of the
Her plan might have worked too, except that you were treated as an outcast, causing
you to doubt her, she planned the attack the day of your fifteenth birthday, but you
left in the middle of the fight, knowing that it was pointless. You left as the two
leaders began to fight, as you saw them use their jutsu to kill each other, you had
seen your mother and father kill each other. You could not face yourself, thinking
that you abandoned them, when you knew they never really loved you. You knew that
your brother would seize power, he was the second most powerful shinobi in the
village, after you. You left, never to return.
As you began to remember you suddenly noticed someone was following you, you turned
around. It was some kid with spiky hair and a big purple bow tie around his waist.
“So, you finally noticed me. So you are from the village hidden in the leaves,
I’m afraid theat you won’t make it back home.” The weirdo said.
“And who are you?” You said as you grabbed your sword.
“I am your destroyer, Sasuke Uciha” The kid told you. He grabbed his own sword
and began to make hand signs. “Time to try out my new technique.” He muttered as
he made a ball of lightning in his hand. He placed his hand over his sword, and as
the lightning wrapped around it, the sword became twice as long and lightning
crackled around it..
“That’s all you got?” You said to him as you pulled out your huge sword. You
began to cast your own jutsu, one that you had created yourself, you surrounded the
entire waterfall with shadows that only you could see through. The weird kid
couldn’t do anything. Then you saw him swing, nearly slicing your arm off. “That
was close, too close...” you thought as you realized that he could see you. “Can
you see me?” you asked.
He turned and answered “yes.” You noticed that his eyes were different than
before, they were red with little swirls.
“How? This shadow is thicker that the hidden mist jutsu.” You said as you began
to swing at him.
“ You haven’t heard of the sharingan? You must not be from the village hidden in
the leaves, but I can’t let you go anywhere with the location of lord
Orochimaru’s base.” He told you as you saw a weird mark spread over his body.
“What is that?” You said as you got rid of the shadows, why waste chakra for a
useless jutsu. You got ready for anything. “That was a base, that weird mansion?”
you thought to yourself.
“This?” he said pointing at the mark, “you have never seen a curse mark
before?” Then he charged. You noticed he was full of renewed strength, could it be
the work of that mark?
You dodge and saw him slip, this was your chance. “Here it goes Flame Shadow
jutsu: Black Drago Slash!” You cried out as a black fire wrapped around your blade
and you formed a dragon that attacked Sasuke. You saw him fall off the cliff and land
in the river below. “That took a while, just who was that kid, and what was up with
that mark?” You said as you sheathed your blade and started to lean against a tree,
you were almost out of chakra, that last attack nearly drained you.
“What, tired already?” You heard coming from the valley. As you stood you saw
that the weird kid was back up the cliff, but his skin was covered in those marks,
and a pair of hands was growing out of his back.
“Eww!” You yelled as he tried to attack you, only to miss and crash in a tree.
As you rolled over laughing you saw him stand up, he was soaking wet!
“Quit laughing!” he told you as he started to pull a branch out of his hair and
brush off dirt. You could barely breathe, let alone get up and fight. As he tried to
stab you all you could do was roll over so that he would miss.
“Nice try, that is all you can do? And what happened to your skin?” You said as
you kicked him out of the way and stood up. You drew your sword as he stood up and
wiped blood off of his face. “And how did you survive that fall?”
“You sure are full of questions, aren’t you? This mark is a curse mark, I told
you, It gives me intense strength. That is how I survived and what happened to my
skin. And as for your first question, you have seen nothing yet!” he said as he
started making hand signs. “Fire style jutsu: Phoenix flower jutsu!” He called
out as fire balls shot out of his mouth.
“You have horrible aim...” you said as you dodged them, one after another.
“Flame Shadow Jutsu: Dragon Claw!” You called out as a huge black claw came out
of your hand and grabbed Sasuke. “See ya!” You said as you jumped, gripping your
sword. “ It’s been bad knowing you.” You said as you brought your sword down on
his head, out to have it knocked away by a kunai, It only cut a big patch of hair off
of his head. Then you turned to see who threw the kunai, it was a really pale looking
“Lord Orochimaru, let me ask for your forgiveness, This trespasser was stronger
than I expected.” Sasuke groveled to the man as you began to run as fast as you
can, just looking at that man made your skin crawl, even the demon inside you was
uneasy. Who was this freak? You hurried to the village that kid was talking about.
As you entered the village you went to see the leader of the village, the hokage.
You had something that you needed to do. You were tired of running, you were going to
step up and accept your role as the leader of your village, but you needed a guard to
escort you, you were a missing-nin after all, you would be attacked before you even
got to the outskirts of the village. It was a woman that looked to be in her
thirties, until someone behind you said “Don’t be fooled, she is really about
“What!” you yelled as you prepared to tell her your situation. You payed all
your money, which was not that much, you had only done a few odd jobs in each village
you had been too, you only had enough for ramen after paying. You greedily ate, not
even leaving a drop of soup. Then you went to the outskirts of the town and climbed a
tree so that you could sleep under the stars, but really you could not afford a hotel
When You woke up you saw that it was morning, you went into the city to find your
bodyguards. You had to accept some really hyper kid and a jounin, named Naruto and
Kakashi. As you began to follow them you were wondering why a ninja would wear an
orange jumpsuit. You then saw that you were getting closer to home, the sky was
darker and the air was warm. You saw that your village’s walls had been burned and
scratched, probably from the attack two years ago. You then saw that someone was
following you. “Hey, you, Kakashi..”
“I know, he’s been following us for about a hour,” Kakashi told you cooly.
“Who’s been following what?” Naruto said confused.
“You’re a real moron aren’t you?” You told Naruto. You laughed when he stuck
up his nose and looked away. Then you saw the figure that was chasing you jump in the
“ I was wondering when you would come back, traitor!” cried the man as he pulled
out a knife. “You had to bring bodyguards? How weak are you, can’t you fend for
yourself?” He said as he charged. Kakashi quickly knocked him out cold.
“What was that guy talking about?” Naruto asked.
“It’s really not any of your business... All you have to do is help me get to
the castle.” You said as you entered the village, keeping to the shadows, which
wasn’t that hard. When you got to the palace gates you told the two shinobi to keep
watch, to make sure no guards came through. When you entered the palace you made
quick work of the guards, knocking them unconscious and tying them up.
You saw your brother sitting on a throne made of gold, with a strange tattoo on his
face, it was shaped like a fang. Was it another curse mark? You saw him stand and
say, “Brother, you finally decided to return, now we can finally finish the
execution of all the rebels.” He then he drew his sword, which looked like the
silhouette of a dragon. Then he charged, but you, drawing your sword, blocked it as
you began to make hand signs.
“Shadow Flame Jutsu: Dragon Fire Clone!” You cried out as flames shot out of
your sword and became shadow clones, but these were no ordinary clones, if they were
destroyed a black flame would shoot out and engulf the enemy. Then you charged, or
your clones did anyway. You stayed back, thinking of a plan. Then you figured it out.
You cried out “Flame shadow jutsu: Dragon Claw!” as a claw shot out of your hand
and grabbed your brother, but he used a substitution jutsu and the claw crushed the
sheath of his sword. “Where did he go?!” you muttered to yourself.
“You’re trying to kill me, Ryuu?” He said as he stood on the roof above you.
“Yes, why do you think I came back, I am the strongest and the oldest, Blaze, I am
the true leader of the village.” You yelled at him as one of your clones attacked,
making him have to jump out of the way, if he blocked the attack he would still get
burned. You made five of your clones jump around him and hold onto him as you called
out “Shadow Flame Jutsu: Dagon Claw!”. This time you knew you couldn’t miss.
You made the clones around him explode in a cloud of fire, burning his whole body.
Then you saw the mark on his face grow over his body, covering every wound and making
spikes grow out of his back, shoulders, knees, and elbows. “What the..” you said
as he grew into a monster.
“This is a curse mark of my own design, I call it the chaos curse mark, I am
invincible now” he said as he disappeared, reappearing behind you and grabbed you
on the neck, trying to break your head off, but you had used a substitution jutsu,
swapping with a clone, as he burned his arm the curse mark began to grow darker,
becoming darker than the shadows around him. You could not see him, so you used the
power of the demon inside you and channeled it’s chakra into your eyes, making it
so that you could see every move he made and predict what he was going to do next.
“Heh,” you told him as you dodged all his moves and countered each one, “you
are really pathetic, aren’t you..., so much for being invincible,” You then
grabbed his arms as he tried to charge and threw him into the wall. “Now surrender,
I don’t want to kill the last of my family.” You said as you stood over him.
“Nice try, acting all noble, when you’re the reason our parents were killed, if
you had not abandoned them at least one would be alive!” He yelled as he began
making hand signs. Then he cried out, “Shadow Flame Style: Chaos Sacrifice!”
“What? That is a forbidden technique, it causes your body to rot away, even if you
win you will die too.” you said as you realized that this was going to be a fight
to the death.
“Now I will avenge our parents!” he said as he stood and the curse mark glowed
with power. Suddenly all the light went out of his eyes, they turned pitch black. Now
I will get my vengeance!” he cried out as he grabbed his sword and gripped it so
tightly that the handle cracked. “Now I will kill you, brother!” He said as he
charged, nearly slicing through your sword. You realized that you were going to have
to kill your brother to stay alive. You suddenly felt great hate flowing through you,
as though you hated everything and everyone, like you wanted to destroy everything.
Then you noticed you chakra was changing, it was becoming black and red, swirling
together around your body and your sword. You noticed that the chakra flowed into the
cracks in your sword and made them whole again. You knew this was the power of that
demon, that your anger had released it.
You were filled with power and rage, You gripped your sword as the chakra swirled
faster and faster. “This is a jutsu of last resort, Shadow Flame Style: BlackFire
Destroyer!” You cried out as the chakra surrounded your blade. You swung and the
immense amount of chakra shot out, destroying your brother and half of the village
behind him. When all was done, you could not stand up and passed out. When you awoke
you were in an infirmary, Kakashi and Naruto were standing beside you.
“Awake at last?” Kakashi asked you as he looked up from his book.
“Yeah, and what happened,” then you saw the cover of his book, “Make-Out
Tactics, what in the world are you reading that for? What are you, a pervert or
something?” When you tried to sit up you realized that you could barely move.
“So, that last attack did use all my chakra.”
“Yeah, and you were lucky you were facing the other way when you used that jutsu,
or you would have wiped out most of the houses and villagers.” Naruto said, butting
“Oh, well, What happened after I passed out?” you asked Kakashi as he put his
“Well, it turns out your brother was a tyrant, but he still had a few supporters,
but the general public say that they will accept you as their leader, so, they asked,
would you like to be the Tsukikage?” he answered.
“Of course, I just have to heal first, it should only take a few days.” You said
as you closed your eyes.
“OK, well, if that’s all, I guess we’ll be off.” Kakashi said as he stood
and walked towards the door.
“See ya,” You told him as he left. You could now sleep and heal, When you were
out of this hospital you would become the Tsukikage, and your destiny would be