Saturday, 31 March 2007
04:59:49 PM (GMT)
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Mayhem in Midtown Manhattan
My heart is pounding wildly. Olivia is an hour late. I can not believe she
this. She has been so excited since we left Thursday night. I am very worried about
even though we had a huge fight and she said she would get here by herself. I really
myself for letting her go on her own. We left Toronto on Thursday night for the most
fabulous weekend trip anyone in the world could ever have. Olivia and I are best
We got this tremendous once in a life time chance to attend the biggest fashion show
event in New York city. We could not believe our luck when we won the contest for the
chance to be at this marvelous event. The excitement built as we rode in the
which was taking us to a five-star hotel in downtown Manhattan. We were treated
like a famous celebrity. We had the most fantastic dinner and then a sight seeing
New York City at night. I have to tell you, my friend Olivia is a wild, outrageous
who goes overboard sometimes. One may even say she is reckless and not very
responsible. She does things without thinking. I am the opposite I am a responsible,
level – headed person. Olivia wanted to do more that evening and I disagreed which
started this whole mess. Her defiant attitude spoiled our wonderful evening. We ended
not talking to each other for the rest of the night. The next day I took the
provided, to go to the big fashion event. Olivia would not come with me in the
and decided she would get there on her own.
Hence, this is where the REAL story begins… I arrive at the fashion show and I am
enjoying appetizers and beverages. “Touching base,” with the rich and famous. I
getting very worried and wondering where Olivia is. I call her cell phone but there
no answer. Now I begin to panic. This is our first time in New York and I know Olivia
does not know the city at all. Suddenly my cell phone rings and its Olivia. She’s
lost and very loud, and panicky
“Where are you?” I asked and yelling at her.
“I think I’m in the Bronx!” screamed Olivia.
“Where?” I yelled back.
“There are shots being fired!” screeched Olivia.
“Olivia what did you get yourself into!” I replied.
“I don’t know!” she said crying.
“Are you sure your in the Bronx?” I asked wildly.
“Umm…..i really can’t tell!” “Remember it’s my first time
here!” “I’m so scared
“Help me please!” screamed Olivia.
“Well how can I help you if you don’t know where you are and I don’t
you are!” I replied.
“I don’t know!” “I’m really terrified I think I’m going to
die!” shrieked Olivia.
“No you’re not going to die!” I said angrily. “Don’t say things
“But I think I really am!” she shouted “I’m in some place and I
don’t know what to do.”
“Well then how can I help you?” “Fine just tell me what it looks
like.” I say to her
“What?” “What do you mean?” she said puzzled.
“I mean where you are what does it look like!” I told her.
“Oh!” “Well there is lots of people and houses.” “People with
GUNS!’ she yells.
“Are you away from the guns like far enough so that you are not going to
be hit?” I
“No I can’t move they will try shooting at me!” “HELP!” she
“Ok well stay down.” I advised her. “And don’t move.”
“Well duh of course I know that.” “I can’t move anyway because
they will start
shooting at me.” She seemed a bit calmer.
“Ok.” I said annoyed.
There was total silence in the background and all I heard was “BANG!” I heard the
drop and people yelling in the background.
“Olivia!” I screamed loudly. “Are you there? Answer me!”
No one answered and the phone cut off……
Panicking I looked desperately around for someone to help me. I did not know what to
and did not know what happened to her. I feared for Olivia’s life and hoped that
would be alright. I no longer cared for the fashion show or to be here at this
I wanted to do was to get help and find her.
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