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song ((open challenge))Category: (general)
Tuesday, 7 October 2008
10:02:30 PM (GMT)
v1.behind this smile,
 is a girl whose heart has been shattered.
 and behind the laughter
is screams no one seems to hear.
and behind these blue eyes,
 is so much pain...
death seems like the only comfort....

scream- 
He can't save you, 
from the awful nightmare. 
He can sheild you for some time. 
But he's gone, 
get over him.

v2. each staza,
each line
has marks of blood
and everytime she breathes
it gtes harder everytime
she falls

scream- 
he can't save you
from this fucking fall
all he can do is cradle
you're broken body and heart
he dosn't want you
he's gone

chorus
(three part harmony)
sleep well, breathe slow
the pain eventually stops
die now, each breath
will fade with every press
fall down, so low,
to you're knees

v3 each song kills this girl
and each poem adds a nail
she can't breathe 
she can't even even
shes dieing and no one can tell

scream-
i can save you
from all your pain
follow me love
[he dosn't want you
you don't need him
you don't waannnnntt hiimmmmm (fade after second time)]

chorus
(three part harmony)
sleep well, breathe slow
the pain eventually stops
die now, each breath
will fade with every press
fall down, so low,
to you're knees

three part scream-
you don't waannnnntt hiimmmmm anymore


((i wanna see if some one can add music to this...))

Comments 
‹Ally-Is-Beast(:› says:   31 October 2008   289147  
wow i write songs as well but this is similar but urs is WAYYYY
better.
 
‹*=ForgottenInNothingness=*› says :   31 October 2008   224511  
haha thanks
I just cant get the beat and music right
 
 
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