um well i made up a song u can comment if u like it or if u think i
can improve on it !
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um well i made up a song u can comment if u like it or if u think i
can improve on it !
Category: song!!!!
Tuesday, 9 January 2007
09:20:59 AM (GMT)
1st verse
u tried to take me on
but no ur long gone
gone of with someone else 
now u think that there the best

swept me of my feet 
when we first did meet
damaged my body 
now trying to sing this melody 
but the voice is gojne
all coz u tried to take me on

2nd verse
u'll always be a part of me
now don't u really see
you've hurt me babe
and now i feel so  lame


3rd verse
tears running down my face
when i am trying to keep ur pace
but wat i really can't take 
is that ur love was fake


( slow and soft )

u'll always be part of me
but if u could only belive
we could make it right 
and stop this fight
so baby plz
will take me on ( long note ) 

i have composed music to go with it but i cant put on here 
so its not much use ! 

hannah123 shouts:   9 January 2007   892376  
it is soooooo good u r awesome at writing songs
ella76543210 says:   9 January 2007   658636  
thanku so much!  !!!
hannah123 sings:   9 January 2007   152623  
no probs
xxKymathyxx shouts:   9 January 2007   361867  
hey bab ur song is brilliant i have a request can u write me a song
just for me plz and send it to me through a letter please i would
appreciate it thank yoo
‹Sophie<3› says:   9 January 2007   957347  
tat is so good
ella76543210 suggests:   9 January 2007   564252  
thx for all ur comments do u think  i should start writing another 1?
Clauds says:   9 January 2007   376997  
nice song
imagine109 says:   10 January 2007   977728  
yes defnet ly you SOULD start anothr one that is fab !
ella76543210 says:   10 January 2007   272475  
thx ur all really incouraging
gymnasticsfreak16 says:   10 January 2007   936153  
its great.........
JCjamescole says:   10 January 2007   258858  
Hey it was okay. Read mine tho.
sand_ninja says:   11 January 2007   544818  
Love da song!!
pnkrckprncess says:   11 January 2007   447539  
It's a really great song, nice job!
ella76543210 sings:   12 January 2007   384329  
Hols says:   12 January 2007   677747  
exelent song ella!
ella76543210 says:   12 January 2007   971956  
teddybear101 says :   13 January 2007   921771  
grat job could you right a song for me as well i would be so


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