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Tuesday, 15 April 2014
06:34:45 PM (GMT)
I hadn't really been expecting to receive anything for Christmas this year.I have
grown rather distant with the majority of my family and have sense been living in a
house I brought for, what was for the most part, a fairly good deal.However, as I
noted, this relationship of distance was only established with the majority of my
family.I've apparently received a boxed and wrapped gift from my cousin, Isabel
Meller, who I've maintained a good relationship with.

Still, as I sit at my kitchen table, near my door with the two transparent glass
windows on either side of it, where I saw the Fedex truck arrive, I'm utterly
surprised that I've received anything from anyone.Oh, and in case you're wondering by
now, my name is Arianna Meller, I'm a nineteen year old college student, living in
the state of New Jersey.I'm currently attending college, so that I can major in
journalism and perhaps minor in something else, that will help me get somewhere
journalism wise.

However, I digress back to the aforementioned Christmas gift, I've received via
arrival of Fedex truck.For a moment, I consider what it may be, simply staring at the
front of it, which has my name and address printed on it.Finally, I start to open it,
I start off almost surreptitiously, as of I don't live alone and someone could be
listening.Then I begin to go much faster, in anticipation of what it is, removing the
wrapping and discarding it elsewhere on the table.At last, I peel pack the tape from
over the top flaps of the box, apparently not requiring the aid of scissors.I stick
my hand in, and remove from all the collective pieces of white plastic silicone,a
video camera.

‹CNNInternationaal› says:   15 April 2014   473383  
Just some elaboration, it's meant to be what I'm calling a ''written
slenderseries'', basically like one of those youtube accounts such as
Marble Hornets or Everymanhybrid, only written using fictional
people.If you don't know what a Slenderseries is, you can google it.
‹Shadow_Cat› says:   15 April 2014   886258  
‹CNNInternationaal› says:   15 April 2014   806067  
Thanks, I'll be continuing it very soon  
Jessy_Singer_482 says:   15 April 2014   880528  
It seems to be along the right track x just need to proof read and
add bits of descriptive detail ie maybe use few more adjectives
‹CNNInternationaal› says :   15 April 2014   869624  
Thanks for the critique, I'll try to do that in the next chapter. 


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