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WarCategory: Poetry
Sunday, 18 April 2010
03:45:34 AM (GMT)
Wind blowing in my hair,
trees swaying side to side,
the smell of flowers drifting in the air,
but quietness, as if someone died.

Fall leaves floating down,
into the whispering river,
but the sound begins to drown,
as I begin to shiver.

Raindrops falling all around me,
while young people are crying,
I look down the hill to see,
everyone lying there dying.

In a corner hides a girl,
whimpering without a sound,
my head slowly begins to whirl,
slowly, I fall to the ground.

Ahead of me, I can not see,
around me, I can not hear,
wondering where I could be,
feeling absorbed in my fear.

The feeling as my body shakes,
as my body becomes numb and cold,
this I know, that when I wake,
I'll be entering a gate of gold.

Comments 
‹U.S.M.C. Recruit› says:   18 April 2010   667201  
That truly is amazing and is true. Wow.
Do you mind if I put the title of this on my profile of one of my
favorite poems?
 
SammyExtreme says:   18 April 2010   100173  
I don't mind. =)
 
‹U.S.M.C. Recruit› says:   18 April 2010   787036  
Alright thank you 
 
SammyExtreme says:   18 April 2010   184616  
You're very welcome.
 
‹>*Silentmemoriesofus*<› says:   18 April 2010   439816  
wow very very nice comment mine?
 
SammyExtreme says:   18 April 2010   294333  
Sure!
 
‹U.S.M.C. Recruit› says:   18 April 2010   854704  
@SammyExtreme 
read my profile you might like it. 
 
SammyExtreme says :   18 April 2010   636317  
Ok, going right now.
 

 
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