Saturday, 13 March 2010
04:32:53 AM (GMT)
I will be adding two new chapters and editing the rest. I feel as if there is no
plot, and after reading Eclipse, I NEED to edit Wishes. And fast.
If I made Wishes like Twilight, it will probably go like this.
Ereya will be an abused orphan in the streets who just came upon a mirror and found
out her destiny is to save the world. She doesn't know how to fight but when a fight
rouses up, she learns that she has capabilities she's never known of.
Destiny will be a royal princess who everybody loves and adores and the person Ereya
wants to be. She is smart, talented, kind, loving and can fight as good as the best
knight in her kingdom.
Bloom will be a baker's daughter who found a canvas and a paintbrush. She spends her
allowance to buy paint and soon learns that she awesome painting abilities. She soon
finds a sword in a corner of a trashed room and finds out that she has great sword
Irene will be a beat up duchess' daughter who learns to draw by herself in dust in
her cell. She helps the group by drawing a map of Teruma when she's never even seen a
Pira replaces Stella and lives a happy life together in the castle and for unknown
reasons leaves with the group to save the world.
Queen Nieve and her husband lives happily but because they're so prejudiced against
Terumians, they sentence the group to death but before a battle starts, Destiny talks
magical sense into them and Teruma and Deria become allies.
All the kingdoms come together and fight the Nariads, nobody dies and everyone lives
happily ever after.
Saffron, Blaise, Riel and Aiden becomes in love with the four Terumian characters but
can't marry them because of their responsibilities. So, they stalk them and beg their
ruler to be able to marry them, the rulers agree and they marry and produces
enchanter/knight children who also lives a happy life.