Saturday, 30 August 2008
05:55:17 AM (GMT)
Well this is my first poem that I have written so far, I'm only starting. So can you
please comment it, write if you liked it or disliked it, if you have any ideas on how
to improve it, etc.
Written to my friend,
Who I’ll be with until the end.
From all the friends I’ll ever know,
You’re the one I’ll care the most.
And if you go, you should know this,
That you’re the one I’ll always miss.
There is nothing I wouldn’t do for you,
And I hope you’d do the same for me too.
So if anyone ever makes you bothered,
Tell me and I’ll make sure you’re covered.
So do you get the picture of how much I care?
For you my friend, I’ll always be there.
So I hope you would do the same for me,
Because you’re my friend and always will be.
The poem that inspired me to write this was the one that is like 'Written with a pen,
Sealed with a kiss, If you are my friend, Please answer me this', Yeah you know it.
So please comment this, I really need your help.