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The little orphan chapter 11Category: The little orphan story
Monday, 14 July 2008
11:47:05 PM (GMT)
Eichiro spent the rest of the day to himself, not saying anything, nor eating anything. His only thoughts were of Mana. When someone tried to talk to him, he only said one or two words. His leg was fine, he thought. But Kiri thought otherwise. Although she knew nothing of first aid, she said she had seen better wounds at a crime scene. But he could walk, and even run, normally. There was certain emptiness in the camp. Nobody was the same without Manas spirit. Before long, the sun was close to hiding behind the tall towers of rock surrounding them. The whole day, he felt as if they were being watched by the same pair of eyes that were in the morning, and the others seemed to notice it too. Before they went, they would have to check, so they dont do anything foolish. But they were all too tired to do that now. The only thing on all of their minds was sleep. * Eichiro woke suddenly in the middle of the night when he heard a branch snap behind him. He was sleeping lightly, and it startled him. But now he was certain that something, or someone, was watching them. He cautiously stood up, his eyes trying to adjust to the dark. There is another snap to his left. He starts to approach his left, but them a snap came to his right. Were there two pairs of eyes? He would have to jump at one, and let the other go. He waited for just one more mistakeAll of a sudden, there is a blinding flash behind him. He takes a leap to the direction of the camera. He comes in contact with another figure. His eyes were somewhat blinded by the flash, but the figure is definitely human. A boy his age. The two boys go wrestling with each other. The opponent bit and clawed at Eichiro, Making his old wounds hurt all over again. The boy finally manages to free himself from Eichiros grip. His vision had cleared up, and he could see more clearly. The boy had neatly kept brown hair. He wore a worn down vest-which looked like it was made for a girl- and t-shirt. He wore shorts on his lower body. He wore glasses, and in his hand, he had a camera. Was he a spy who was working for the enemy? Before he had a chance to think about it, the boy sets the flash off on his camera, blinding Eichiro. When he regains his vision, the boy is long gone. He was certainly sneaky. But still what he was doing puzzled him. Why would he need a camera? If he was working for their enemy, he would know what they looked like without pictures. He was very powerful man. He made his way back to the camp, all the others still sleeping. He thought over the incident as he tried to drift back to sleep. He could not understand why a boy his age would wear a hand-me-down vest made for a woman. He was probably underprivileged. But he didnt have the energy to think about it any more. His old wounds still hurt, but he still fell asleep nonetheless. * Eichiro finds himself Dream Traveling again. He is at the entrance to the large castle built into the mountains. This time, he is determined to find Mana, to make sure shes safe. He rushed to the dungeons as fast as he could. When he reached the dungeon corridors, it wasnt as silent as one would expect. He could hear very faint sobbing. He recognized the voice only too well. He follows the sounds until he reached the cell that he marked. Sure enough, there was Mana, Kneeling on the floor, her face in her hands, sobbing. Her body is covered in cuts and bruises. She looked devastated. She seemed to notice a presence and looked up, expecting a guard, but when she saw who it really was, her face filled with joy. Eichiro walked through the cell door, and Mana leaped up and hugged him. He wasnt expecting that reaction, but he slowly wrapped his arms around her. Im so glad to see you, Eichiro. Mana struggled to say, her voice breaking up. Dont worry, Mana. Me and the others are coming tomorrow morning to get you out of here. He didnt want to mention that he was here earlier looking through her stuff. He didnt want Mana to think that he was disrespectful of her privacy. But he didnt need to mention it. Eichiro, they took my flute. I dont know why they would want it Its more special then you think. Ill explain everything when were out of here. You sound so confident. I have no doubts well get you out of here. Nobody will get caught again. Im sorry for abandoning you guys. I realize now that it was foolish. Youre forgiven. You dont happen to know where your flute is, do you? I think they put it with the weapons. But Im not sure. Its a strange place to put it. Its not too strange. Youre probably right. Mana tried to smile, but he could tell she hurt all over. He spent the rest of the night talking with her, comforting her. The last thing he said before waking up was that they would be after her before noon. * When Eichiro Woke, he felt emotions that he had never felt before. What they were,he didnt know, but they werent too important. There was hope. He knew Mana was very brave, and somewhat ignorant-he hated to admit- But now it was his time to return to favor!

‹Up-in-the-Clouds› says:   15 July 2008   981816  
awesome!! i cant wait to see what happens!!!! i was dying because it
took you so long to make this one lol
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   15 July 2008   433614  
I know copying the chapters from paper to the computer takes so long
and i was sorta procrastinating, but i'll try not to procrastinate
Kirti says:   15 July 2008   223287  
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! he's in! and Mana's all right!
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   16 July 2008   545572  
She is! :D
I wasn't planning for Eichiro to dream travel, but i couldn't stand
leaving the suspence.
Kiri_Shimoto says:   19 July 2008   172659  
nice!!!!!!i like it!
‹{☜☏☞}› says:   21 July 2008   957981  
I LOVE IT! This chapter Rocks!
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   22 July 2008   386628  
thank you 
‹Joanna;FinallySetHerselfFree♥› says:   1 May 2009   841337  
Ooh, can't wait to here what's so special about the flute...

Eichiro and Mana are SOOO right for each other 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   1 May 2009   747317  
Do you think so? :P
‹Joanna;FinallySetHerselfFree♥› says:   1 May 2009   129135  
Yup! I think they're cute 
Kirti says:   3 May 2009   484342  
... rereading it, I can't help but notice...

Eichiro's anorexic!! First time out of prison and he doesn't
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says :   4 May 2009   699797  

I plan on editing all the old chapters anyways, I'll get him to eat
something then.


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