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Tuesday, 8 July 2008
01:55:58 PM (GMT)
Okay. for all that need to know, I wrote this. it's a romance/slight
humor/thought-provoking novel thing that I'm gonna post in chapters. I had a dream
about it actually just inspired me to write it. so, here we go, please enjoy
and comment.

“No! don’t do that!” Coffee cups rattled, and stuff fell over, Collin standing, hands
gripping the edge of the table, so tight, that his knuckles were white. He was
leaning into Casey and Cameron’s face. “What do you want us to do?” Casey shot back.
Collin leaned back and sighed. “That’s basically murder.” He said, massaging his
temples. “Listen. We walk a fine line here.” Cameron explained. “I don’t care! It’s
not the baby’s fault! Listen, Aborting it won’t solve your problems.” He said,
leaning in again. "You can't guys. If your stupid enough to get
should have the kid." Collin spat. "We aren't stupid! Look at my grades! look at
hers!" Cameron said angrily. "So. you were stupid enough to wind up with her
pregnant. you should know better." Collin said, sighing. "I know you two have been
going out since the seventh grade...but still..." Collin was cut short. "Look dude.
it's the last year of high school. we're almost out of school. then we can get
married...and...." Cameron sat back down and stopped talking. "And?" Collin said, and
took a sip of coffee. "I don't know..." Cameron said and leaned back. "Just don't
abort it." Collin said, and stood up. he grabbed his parka-like jacket, with fur trim
on the hood. he walked out of the coffee house and into the snow. he walked over to
his blood-red Volvo, and slid into it. Cameron and Casey sat in the back. Collin
started it up, and backed out. "My house..." He said, and drove down the road. they
drove in silence for a long while, only Cameron and casey whispering to each other,
until they pulled up to a huge mansion. Collin was adopted by a famous inventor, and
now lived in luxury, although he didn't exactly care for it. he walked into the huge
front hall, and noticed the maid, Beatrice, cleaning up a broken vase. "Ah! Beatrice!
go take a break. I'll clean this up!" he said, smiling. 'But, sir..." She began to
speak. "Stop with the sir! call me by my name." he said, still smiling. "No go take
that break. this vase isn't a big deal." he said, and began to pick up pieces of it,
and put them into the bag that Beatrice was using. she bowed quickly, and shuffled
off. Collin finished picking up the pieces, and threw them away. he walked into his
large kitchen and sat down. he waited for Cameron and Casey to sit down. Casey spoke
up. "We talked about it in the car, Collin...and we decided....We're gonna go through
with it." 

that was Chapter one..please wait for the next install ment, which I am still

‹XxCasey_the_KittyxX› says:   8 July 2008   579831  
Well, that's... interesting. I can't wait till you write the next
Peak says:   8 July 2008   837768  
yays! it will be awesome.
‹XxCasey_the_KittyxX› says :   8 July 2008   679564  
Sweet!! I hope so. Yays. Lol.


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