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The little orphan chapter 9Category: The little orphan story
Tuesday, 1 July 2008
03:22:55 PM (GMT)
Mana formed several plans in the dirt,but none of them worked. she angrily wiped off the one she was working on. perhaps they would just go in without a plan...but that was unwise,let alone dangerous.they wanted to stay undected as much as possible. going in without a plan wasn't safe. but it seemed like the only option right now. without knowing the castle rooms,it was kinda hard to make a plan. Kiri and Takuya had guns,Ato had a pocket knife,and that was it for weapons. But they still had suprise on their side. if they sneak around without being caught,they could probably get away with it. Mana signalled her friends to get ready to go. She was glad that she didn't go alone. Now that she knew all the hazards,she wouldn't stand a chance. The group started to scale the steep mountain face. The rescue had finally started! * Mana was the smallest of them all,so she would go scout ahead. She cautiously opened the large wooden doors,trying her best not to make the old timbers creak. Mana quickly ran in and looked around. There was no guards at the moment. she beckoned her friends to come,and they quickly ran to her. Minutes seemed like hours for Mana as they searched for the dungeons. they tried their best to keep talking to a minimum and when they did talk,very quietly. It was almost an hour later,when they finally opened the doors to the dungeons. She dimwittedly ran down the hall,not worried about any guards being there. the only thing on her mind was Eichiro. Mana dumbly cried out. "Eichiro?Are you here?" "Mana?" The sound of Eichiro's voice echoed in her brain. His voice sounded so weak... Mana followed the voice until she reached his cell. He was sitting on the floor of the cell,A fresh cut covering his leg. Mana quickly found the keys hanging on the wall and opened the door. what a stupid place to put them! She ran in and knelt beside Eichiro. Her friends had caught up with her by now. They hurt my left leg badly,I don't think i can walk..." Mana studdered as she thought of something. "Ato,Takuya<come here and help him out of here! we can treat his wound when we're out." The two boys ran to Eichiro and Struggled to get him standing. Once they had Eichiro on their shoulders,The started to go back the way they came. Mana put they keys back on the hook and ran after her friends. It went a lot faster going out then coming in as they knew where they were going slightly better. It was strange that they had not run into any guards yet...As in responce to her thoughts,there was a huge guards awaiting them. She quickly notices the group and starts running toward them. Suddenly,there is the earsplitting sound of a gun. The guard fell to the ground,limp and dead. Mana looked around to see Kiri with her gun smoking. Mana had just seen someone die. it was a horrible feeling. But there was not time to mourn. More guards were sure to be on their tail after that loud gunshot. And Mana didn't want to see more lived gone from the world. Luckily they were close to the exit. After a few mintutes,Mana could practicly see the entrance in front of her. But there were two hefty guards blocking the gate. Mana and co. stop promptly. Mana's head spins as she thinks of a plan. "GO! i'll hold them off for you! You need to get Eichiro out of here!" Mana cries to her companions. "No,Mana! we're not leaving without you!" Sera replies. but she is too late,as Mana runs off into the castle,the guards hot on her heels. Her friends have nothing to do but run out of the castle. They quickly sprint out and scramble down the mountain.

MeepingMeep says:   1 July 2008   836186  
Still goin great! : )
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   1 July 2008   527942  
thanks meep :P
‹Ashe_Amu› says:   1 July 2008   433742  
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   1 July 2008   518867  
:D i am workin hard on chpt 10. the focus is on Eichiro in that one
instead of Mana. what happened to her remains a mystery to everyone
but me >:D
Sera_Adachi says:   2 July 2008   566357  
Your story is awesome. Mana had better survive! Or you'll hear from
me later! JK...or am I?
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   2 July 2008   683289  
of course she survives! she's the main charactor! you think i'd kill
her off for a story? im not that cruel...
Mana says:   2 July 2008   819364  
*sigh of relief*
Sera_Adachi says:   3 July 2008   252397  
Hey, I didn't know that in the story! I was worried for Mana!
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   3 July 2008   672447  
yeah i know that! XD
Kirti says:   3 July 2008   132223  
uh-oh. that's suicide...
Kirti says:   3 July 2008   686364  
wait a second... the heros have killed someone and the villians
whys Eichiro in jail anyway?
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   3 July 2008   661558  
That's still unknown to you guys. Eichiro has a lot of secrets,and i
know them,but i won't tell you guys until he reveals it to the group
and who knows about the death...?
Kirti says:   6 July 2008   167755  
they shot a guard and the guard fell to the ground "limp and dead"...
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   6 July 2008   355224  
yeah :P
‹Joanna;FinallySetHerselfFree♥› says:   1 May 2009   292238  
I hope Kiyomi's okay 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   1 May 2009   634543  
‹Joanna;FinallySetHerselfFree♥› says:   1 May 2009   934595  
Kiyomi's coolnes! she's like the definition of cool 
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says:   1 May 2009   591497  
Lol. xD
purple_bubbles says:   11 September 2009   627595  
nice story!!!!!!!
‹< Dragon-tamer-1995 >› says :   11 September 2009   447481  
Thank ya Wendy. :D


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