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Sunday, 5 December 2010
10:00:29 AM (GMT)
The sadness of life brings me down
but the light of your smile takes me back
I have seen many horrors across my time
Ive traveled to hell and back
the scars that run deep into my soul
are the reminders of this hatred
but when i go back down
to those firey gates of hell
and i see that old friend of mine
with that he evil grin he says
have you had enough
but i stop right there and say
out of all these scars that i have
ill go through each one again
for that love of mine again

Writers note: 
Hey i was just wondering what you all thought of these poems. Ive gotten great
responses from some ppl but i havnt heard from ppl i dont know

Rena9000 says:   7 December 2010   494116  
This sounds better. Just let your fingers type the words.
don't think about them.
hi_ryan says :   12 December 2010   786572  
 keep dreaming. (i mean in the way that this poem came from a dream
and its really good)


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