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Friday, 3 October 2008
07:08:51 PM (GMT)
Eddie: I’m on early because I’m sick 

Taylor: Oh I’m home because I’m hurt  

Eddie: What happen? 

Taylor: My mom beat me again.

Eddie: Oh I’m so sorry. Can I ask you something?

Taylor: Sure. 

Eddie: well I need a girlfriend and you seem like a nice person and I know we just
met but I want to go out with you.

Taylor: I say yes.

Eddie: Cool well I have to go now my mom is coming..

 Taylor: Bye. 

Eddie: Bye can I have your number.?

Taylor: It’s 207-783-5678 (Not a real number hopefully).

Eddie: OK bye I will call at 8 .

Taylor: Bye. 

Taylor logged off and she put her laptop away and went to eat lunch. When she went
into her kitchen she saw her grandma making soup. She sat down and then she heard the
front door open then shut. Her mom walked into the kitchen and she went to the fridge
and took out a beer bottle. She sat down next to Taylor. Taylor pick the beer bottle
up and she open it and she dump it down the drain then she went into the fridge and
dump the rest out and she broke the bottles and said

Taylor: You can’t keep doing this mom. I can’t take it anymore. I’m and tired
of waking up in pain and have to cover my bruises. 

Mom: You little wise cracker you think you can just boss a grownup around well your
wrong.

The mom got up and she  push her to the wall and punch her in the face and she took
her long nails and claw at her arm. She kicked her in the leg 10 times and she throw
the soup at her. Taylor slide to the ground and curled her self in a ball.

Comments 
‹WE'RE GOING IN THE VAGINAAAA› says:   3 October 2008   682796  
I like it, but just a suggestion, if its supposed to be an actual story, I'd use ' " sjdfg" ' more often. Just saying
 
punkchick306 says:   3 October 2008   452521  
oh wow ur a great writer
 
‹Emma Bear› says:   3 October 2008   754288  
I don't use "123" because  its more easy if you spread it out and use
diffrent colors for each person who is talking and the name of the
person who is talking
 
‹Emma Bear› says:   3 October 2008   851879  
Thanks I never knew I was good I jsut write stuff that I think of
 
Practial_Nostalgia says:   3 October 2008   982623  
It alows the writer to add more detail into how the person is
speaking. Otherwise it sounds more like Rolplaying than an actual
story.
I'm not trying to be difficult, but I'm takign a class right now on
stuff like this, and my teacher get like, ><, when I do this kind of
stuff.
‹Emma Bear› says:   3 October 2008   735794  
I like it the way I do it though
 
‹<3 Alison› says:   3 October 2008   872523  
I love your writting!
 
‹Emma Bear› says:   3 October 2008   656823  
Thanks
 
littlemizzcrazy says:   5 October 2008   712833  
why are you using my brother as an example oh and this is kasey his
sister
‹Emma Bear› says :   5 October 2008   131497  
I'm not  useing him as a example. I'm  just useing the name because I
can't think of a boys name  This dosn't have to do about him this is a
made up storie.
 

 
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