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Monday, 31 March 2008
07:10:22 PM (GMT)
Okay, i'm really bored, so i'll write a story. Now, i'm not as good a writer as some
people, but i'm gonna try anyway.

Setting: not important
Characters: Mackenzie, Jessica, and Nicholas

Mackenzie: I'm bored. 
Jessica: Me too.
Nicholas: Well, what do you want to do?
Mackenzie: Let's go to the mall?!
Jessica: Yah! That sounds fun! They've got a new store that i want to check out.
Nicholas: Do we have to?
Jessica: Yes! Two against one, we win.
Nicholas: Please don't make me go!
Mackenzie: Too bad!

*at the mall*

?: AHHH!!!! Someone, help me!!!
Mackenzie: What was that?
Jessica: I don't know.
Nicholas: Well duh, you don't know!
Jessica: Oh, shut up.
Nicholas: Why don't you make me!?
Mackenzie: Oll right! Stop! You guys are acting like three year olds. Ever since mom
and dad died, you've been bickering constantly!
Jessica: She's right. We've gotta get along, for mom and dad's sake.
Nicholas: Fine, for mom and dad.
Mackenzie: Thank you, noe, let's go check out that scream!

*at the new store*

                The store is dark and empty. There's a single light on in the back.
Mackenzie: Hello? Is anyone there?
Nicholas: Hello?!
Jessica: Let's go check out that back room.

*in the back room*

Mackenzie: Oh my god!
Jessica: What's wrong? *comes running in the room*
Nicholas: Oh my. *there's a body on the floor*
Jessica: She's been shot.

*back at the house*

Nicholas: I can't believe this!
Jessica: I know. I can't believe I got this great top for only 5 dollars!
Mackenzie: I think he was talking about the murder.
Jessica: Oh, sorry.

I'll write more later. Tell me if you have any ideas!

chocolateprincess says:   31 March 2008   677519  
hey nice story
‹♥Stevie;;HereSheGoesAGAIN♥› says:   31 March 2008   599154  
Pretty good :D
‹<3!!!!CamelsandOttersRock!!!!!<3› writes:   31 March 2008   639621  
not as good as yours pinkglitter.
and thanx! Any ideas?
rainydays says:   5 April 2008   886817  
Hey you named a character after me! 
Just so everyone knows, I am nothing like the girl in the story 'cause
the girl named Jess in the story sort o' frightens me.
Awesome story! I shall go read chapter two!
‹<3!!!!CamelsandOttersRock!!!!!<3› writes:   5 April 2008   476963  
Thank you Jessy! I'm glad you like it. It's not as good as any of
your stories though!
anime_freak_92 says:   10 April 2008   264461  
this is really good!
‹<3!!!!CamelsandOttersRock!!!!!<3› writes:   10 April 2008   336336  
thanx!!! and yeah, you commented.
tiggerlemon101 says:   10 September 2008   467962  
Hey, I read like up to chapter five or six before realizing that this
untitled entry was Chapter One.  Elohel!  I'm presuming this was
before you sort of 'figured out' kupika maybe?  Either way, I was
like, "Well where the cow is chapter one?"  Elohel!
This is actually quite good, but it bothers the heck out of me when
people right that way, with colons and stars and such.  Oh well, it's
still very fantabulous.  I read the last chapter like amonth ago, but
I was too lazy to read the beginning.  Elohel!

  Also, the fact that the ratio of your typos to my typos is about
1:10 sort of makes up for the annoying format.  So I'll forgive you! 
‹<3!!!!CamelsandOttersRock!!!!!<3› says:   11 September 2008   497816  
Not really. I just couldn't think of what to name it. 
THanks though. I didn't really know how to end it, so the ending
And, yes, i know. The format is weird, but i was too lazy to write
tiggerlemon101 says:   11 September 2008   237747  
Elohel!  Aw well, doesn't really take away from the story at all!
‹<3!!!!CamelsandOttersRock!!!!!<3› says :   11 September 2008   418194  
Thanks. That's very nice.


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