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Thursday, 9 December 2010
04:08:48 AM (GMT)
My heart throbbed and pulsed throughout my body as my palms grew red and slippery
with sweat. One wrong move and it would be my last. I searched with shaking hands for
an exit or some type of an escape, but found none. Submerged in a sea of unforgiving
empty darkness, lost in the unpredictable wave receding to the shadowed corners of my
mind, I began to lose sight and hold of reality. Trapped in a pitch black room with
walls made entirely of cement and a solid titainium door obscuring my only path to
   I felt the numbingly cold cement press to my back as I slid to the floor with warm
tears stinging my eyes that wondered aimlessly about the black abyss I had found
myself in.
   Even through thick cement walls, I still managed to hear the bloodcurdling screams
of excruciating pain belonging to my one and only closest friend. I knew her since I
was a child and promised her I would do anything for her; that I would never leave
her. And now, I could do nothing but listen to her screams as she endured the worst
form of torture for any woman.
  I let warm tears roll down my cheeks and hid my face between my knees trying to
keep my harsh sobs quiet enough so they wouldn't hear. If they heard, I would face
the same fate my dear friend was bearing as this very moment.
"Please...", I whispered to myself, "please God..." More tears leaked from my eyes
and a hard sigh escaped my lips. My chest heaved unevenly with frigid gasps burning
my lungs and throat as they left my lips.
   Scared and alone I let a scream build in my chest and let it break through the
dead silence.

There was no escaping this time.
I was going to die here, my friend was going to die here.
For the first time in a very long time, I had finally lost every last ounce of faith
I had left.
There was no one there to save me this time...
Last edited: 23 December 2010

‹♥Mӗw♥› says:   9 December 2010   183032  
*reads first line*

‹♥Mӗw♥› says:   9 December 2010   152272  
oh btw almost done with putting the roleplay into story form.
racey says:   23 December 2010   355705  
um wow, good, but um wow
‹Lost_Forest› says:   23 December 2010   177760  
a bit extreme i know but i was in the mood for writing something and
this came out. im very satisfied with this piece of writing and i
think it has a very nice flow to it. it sounds conciededbut its what i
truely think of this piece. it is better than my other little writing
thingys lol. i would like to know very much what you truely think of
racey says :   24 December 2010   361846  
get it published please, in one of those magazine things with short


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