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Monday, 21 May 2007
12:25:20 PM (GMT)
If life is just a game,
then why are people dying?
If life is just a game,
then why are people crying?

If life is just a joke,
then why is no one amused?
If life is just a joke,
then why are children abused?

If life is just a dream,
then why is my mother dead?
If life is just a dream,
when will I wake in my bed?

Life isn't a game,
because no one is playing.
Life isn't a game,
because no one is staying.

Life isn't a joke,
and no one is amused.
Life isn't a joke,
little kids are abused.

Life isn't a dream,
because everything is real.
Life isn't a dream,
or no one would feel.

SilkySilhouette says:   21 May 2007   768397  
I like it ^_^
Very unique topic.
‹*=ForgottenInNothingness=*› says:   21 May 2007   941328  
*bows* thank you
‹EvaHEROIN› says:   21 May 2007   934321  
I like it, especially the last verse! Tis good *claps*
‹*=ForgottenInNothingness=*› says:   21 May 2007   746913  
*bows again* thank you...
abc_ suggests:   21 May 2007   695714  
Life............ it sure beats the alternative by 1000%.
‹*=ForgottenInNothingness=*› says:   21 May 2007   328543  
eh maybe
‹Music_Lover_121091_<3› says:   22 May 2007   253777  
i LOVE this one. horray for you.
halohabo says:   25 May 2007   247543  
omg so true. if only everyone new that!
‹Jamssy› writes:   27 May 2007   186757  
wow...ur talented??
*clap clap*
‹*=ForgottenInNothingness=*› says:   27 May 2007   795675  
thank you all* bows*
sexy_sydnie says:   1 June 2007   773169  
that is so true life isnt just a game
LilMissKissTHIS says:   2 June 2007   477279  
wow that is sooo good!!
peppermint_002 says:   10 June 2007   175455  
very very nice and true. though a little sad. VERY SAD!!
‹SunLitMoon.› says:   4 July 2007   921728  
That's really good!
GoldnSilverFangs says:   16 July 2007   251771  
Not bad, but don't limit your writing this subject to rhymes.  It
gets sort of childish because you are limited by your choice of words.
 Poems don't have to rhyme.  It's often better if they don't.
It was still really well done though. ^_^
‹*=ForgottenInNothingness=*› says:   16 July 2007   189412  
i rhyme on here, but other then that i broaden my horizon
thanks for the constructive critisism
kelcylane says:   31 July 2007   165928  
me write poemtry to!!!!!
tooday me act like 2yearm m old talkimmmmmmmmmmmmmmng lik i dov
candy_gurl says:   6 August 2007   892954  
thats realy good
Moonstone_Absol says:   20 August 2007   429374  
It's cool.
DeanWincesterFan says:   1 September 2007   545315  
woot! good stuff!
SaiChan says:   2 November 2007   333831  
Rukeyi says:   26 November 2007   566497  
Wow. *bows down humbbely*
That was amazing. Very well written
‹Ambulance› says:   18 April 2008   343914  
whats your name(i need it for author of this poem, im using it
‹Carmen Dee loves CookieMuffinz› says:   1 June 2008   733566  
Things about war:
IT kills inocent people.
IT is a waste of time
IT does nothing to help
IT kills people
IT leaves people sad
‹Carmen Dee loves CookieMuffinz› says:   1 June 2008   235154  
and I like that poem.
‹*=ForgottenInNothingness=*› says:   9 June 2008   231253  
jesus0809 shouts:   8 November 2008   725195  
piratica says:   11 November 2008   129972  
*is impressed*
‹//xx♥insane_cookie♥xx//› says:   15 November 2008   613531  
that great job
‹*=ForgottenInNothingness=*› says:   16 November 2008   278188  
Spam says:   9 December 2008   384265  
mrskullkid says:   18 December 2008   358316  
that is something to either think about or be depressed about.
‹GOINGINSANE› says:   23 December 2008   888524  
thats so good
‹aireeole› says:   25 December 2008   293837  
This ish really good.
*claps for hours*
‹*=ForgottenInNothingness=*› says:   25 December 2008   762928  
*bow and blushes* thank you all for the WONDERFUL cmnts. cept the
SPAM lets not do that okie?
Lowkey says:   2 January 2009   385934  
‹яоѕэѕ aяє вluэ™› says:   25 January 2009   135454  
‹I_RAWR_COOKIES_DONUTS_MEN› says:   9 April 2009   871265  
‹Music_Lover_121091_<3› says:   20 April 2009   224659  
i luv this one hunny......u never showed it to me before....
‹JacobJigglypuff› says:   22 December 2009   605056  
all of that is bogus.all that stuff happens cause its necessary to
equalize everything and you have no proof that your not living a
KitchieX16 says:   16 March 2010   837062  
i like's very nice
ToriToxik says :   23 March 2011   827509  
That Opened My Eyes, Actually.


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