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They All Lied

Category: (general)

Monday, 21 May 2007
12:25:20 PM (GMT)

If life is just a game,
then why are people dying?
If life is just a game,
then why are people crying?

If life is just a joke,
then why is no one amused?
If life is just a joke,
then why are children abused?

If life is just a dream,
then why is my mother dead?
If life is just a dream,
when will I wake in my bed?

Life isn't a game,
because no one is playing.
Life isn't a game,
because no one is staying.

Life isn't a joke,
and no one is amused.
Life isn't a joke,
little kids are abused.

Life isn't a dream,
because everything is real.
Life isn't a dream,
or no one would feel.

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Comments

SilkySilhouette says:

21 May 2007 768397

I like it ^_^
Very unique topic.
Kudos!

‹*=ForgottenInNothingness=*› says:

21 May 2007 941328

*bows* thank you

Grave Digger - 18 February 2009

‹EvaHEROIN› says:

21 May 2007 934321

I like it, especially the last verse! Tis good *claps*

10 things you might not have known about Moi... - 7 June 2009

‹*=ForgottenInNothingness=*› says:

21 May 2007 746913

*bows again* thank you...

Grave Digger - 18 February 2009

abc_ suggests:

21 May 2007 695714

Life............ it sure beats the alternative by 1000%.

‹*=ForgottenInNothingness=*› says:

21 May 2007 328543

eh maybe

Grave Digger - 18 February 2009

‹Music_Lover_121091_<3› says:

22 May 2007 253777

i LOVE this one. horray for you.

Addicted - 21 April 2009

halohabo says:

25 May 2007 247543

omg so true. if only everyone new that!

‹Jamssy› writes:

27 May 2007 186757

wow...ur talented??
*clap clap*

Valentines Day ;] - 5 February 2009

‹*=ForgottenInNothingness=*› says:

27 May 2007 795675

thank you all* bows*

Grave Digger - 18 February 2009

sexy_sydnie says:

1 June 2007 773169

that is so true life isnt just a game

LilMissKissTHIS says:

2 June 2007 477279

wow that is sooo good!!

peppermint_002 says:

10 June 2007 175455

very very nice and true. though a little sad. VERY SAD!!

‹SunLitMoon.› says:

4 July 2007 921728

That's really good!

Untitled - 10 November 2009

GoldnSilverFangs says:

16 July 2007 251771

Not bad, but don't limit your writing this subject to rhymes.  It
gets sort of childish because you are limited by your choice of words.
 Poems don't have to rhyme.  It's often better if they don't.
It was still really well done though. ^_^

‹*=ForgottenInNothingness=*› says:

16 July 2007 189412

i rhyme on here, but other then that i broaden my horizon
thanks for the constructive critisism

Grave Digger - 18 February 2009

kelcylane says:

31 July 2007 165928

me write poemtry to!!!!!
tooday me act like 2yearm m old talkimmmmmmmmmmmmmmng lik i dov

Untitled - 30 January 2014

candy_gurl says:

6 August 2007 892954

thats realy good

Moonstone_Absol says:

20 August 2007 429374

It's cool.

DeanWincesterFan says:

1 September 2007 545315

woot! good stuff!

SaiChan says:

2 November 2007 333831

Nice.

I don't know what to do with this account :\ - 29 August 2009

Rukeyi says:

26 November 2007 566497

Wow. *bows down humbbely*
That was amazing. Very well written

‹Ambulance› says:

18 April 2008 343914

whats your name(i need it for author of this poem, im using it
somewhere

Yerr gonna love my nuts - 8 November 2009

‹Carmen Dee loves CookieMuffinz› says:

1 June 2008 733566

Things about war:
IT kills inocent people.
IT is a waste of time
IT does nothing to help
IT kills people
IT leaves people sad

Well, no one's gonna read this anyway... - 24 February 2009

‹Carmen Dee loves CookieMuffinz› says:

1 June 2008 235154

and I like that poem.

Well, no one's gonna read this anyway... - 24 February 2009

‹*=ForgottenInNothingness=*› says:

9 June 2008 231253

thanks

Grave Digger - 18 February 2009

jesus0809 shouts:

8 November 2008 725195

THAT IS WEIRD!!!!!!!

piratica says:

11 November 2008 129972

*is impressed*

Gender and Music - 27 April 2010

‹//xx♥insane_cookie♥xx//› says:

15 November 2008 613531

that is...wow great job

my site.. please Join lol - 24 December 2008

‹*=ForgottenInNothingness=*› says:

16 November 2008 278188

thnks

Grave Digger - 18 February 2009

Spam says:

9 December 2008 384265

SPAM SPAM SPAM SPAM SPAM SPAM

A CLUB FOR SPAMMERS!!!! (coming soon!) - 14 December 2008

mrskullkid says:

18 December 2008 358316

that is something to either think about or be depressed about.

...Love/Death - 5 January 2009

‹GOINGINSANE› says:

23 December 2008 888524

thats so good

Memories for me - 8 May 2009

‹aireeole› says:

25 December 2008 293837

This ish really good.
*claps for hours*

Spell Your Name In Different Ways - 1 July 2007

‹*=ForgottenInNothingness=*› says:

25 December 2008 762928

*bow and blushes* thank you all for the WONDERFUL cmnts. cept the
SPAM lets not do that okie?

Grave Digger - 18 February 2009

Lowkey says:

2 January 2009 385934

WEIRD. :D

‹яоѕэѕ aяє вluэ™› says:

25 January 2009 135454

AGREED.!.

I love you. BY : Trisha Phan. - 11 January 2009

‹I_RAWR_COOKIES_DONUTS_MEN› says:

9 April 2009 871265

BEAUTIFUL JUST PLAIN BEAUTIFUL T________T

AMAZING QUOTES~ - 12 April 2009

‹Music_Lover_121091_<3› says:

20 April 2009 224659

i luv this one hunny......u never showed it to me before....

Addicted - 21 April 2009

‹JacobJigglypuff› says:

22 December 2009 605056

all of that is bogus.all that stuff happens cause its necessary to
equalize everything and you have no proof that your not living a
dream.

Love - 30 November 2010

KitchieX16 says:

16 March 2010 837062

i like it...it's very nice

My first diary - I OWN THIS - 16 March 2010

ToriToxik says :

23 March 2011 827509

That Opened My Eyes, Actually.

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