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The ThingCategory: horror book
Tuesday, 12 December 2006
04:36:22 PM (GMT)
chapter 1            part 2]

"oh my head" said Sarah as she wakes up.What time is it,Why is it so dark?"Sarah got
up feeling ohso very woozy.She heads slowly back to her campsite,trying to remember
what happened.She hears a earshreading screach coming from her camps direction and
all of a sudden it goes dead silent.Sarah is walking cautiosly and she comes in view
of a fire.She gets a sudden chill going down  her back as a SHE she hears a whisper
by her ear"your next". Shes terrified she doesn't look back all she does is run to
her ones at the campsite all there is is a campfire.She gets scared to death
when she hears a sharp plea"SARAH' it was coming from inside her moms tent.Sarah
walks slowly to where she herd the plea.She got close enough where she could see the
blood stanes inside the tent.Sarah opened the tents zipper and she screams bloody
murder of what she saw.Blood everywhere she gaged of the smell of the dead.She sees
her dad eyes wide open,she only saw his eyes when Sarah looked away because she
already knew he was dead.She turns to her mom,ther she was,still slitely breathing
but flesh torn all the way to the bone.Sarah crys but trys her best to keep calm but
it over bears her.She runs to the rode for someone was coming and she
screams"HELP".The car stopes and Sarah told him her mom was going to  die soon if we
dont get to the hospital.As the man was driving and my mom and me are in the back
seat.I looked back tword the camp and saw the Black figure standing in the rode.Sarah
only saw thoughs blood curling eyes and its mouth.As we were driving away to the
hospital The Thing mouthed the words"YOUR NEXT"

MrHello says:   12 December 2006   523661  
Ahh.Scary... I LOVE IT
patgirlric1993 says:   12 December 2006   442658  
Angel_baby says:   12 December 2006   567771  
Gosh....i'm afraid to close my eyes tonight Lol!! that was scary!!
patgirlric1993 says:   12 December 2006   912149  
oooohhhhhh thank you sooooo much i've been waiting 4 that kind of
comment will you keep reading as i go on
supertori11 says:   12 December 2006   522448  
omg ur s is way better than mine... im writing a horor story after i
finish the  one im working on.
daughtersmom says:   12 December 2006   686382  
Thats My Girl!!
patgirlric1993 says:   12 December 2006   266223  
patgirlric1993 says:   12 December 2006   985865  
oh 4 supertori11.........thanx i'll check it out just tell me
phantomring12 says:   13 December 2006   767734  
good job its good!
Pinkwink9 says:   14 December 2006   364126  
awsome!!!!!! keep writing!!!!!!!
patgirlric1993 says:   14 December 2006   579811  
i am going to
phantomring12 says:   14 December 2006   685155  
umm hello r u inogirng me lol
coolcat101 says:   14 December 2006   552252  
That was so scary!I am afraid to go to soccer camp now!
coolcat101 says:   14 December 2006   353167  
That was so scary that I'm afraid to go to soccer camp now!
coolcat101 says:   14 December 2006   712986  
patgirlric1993 says:   14 December 2006   649774  
thanx keep reading you'll be scared to go to other places
nicemo says:   17 December 2006   978188  
pretty cool
patgirlric1993 says :   17 December 2006   958473  


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