Wednesday, 24 September 2008
04:08:22 AM (GMT)
Should I write a story?
I love writing, but am I good?
Please message me [Letters work, too!] after reading this sample of my
work.(Sorry if I miss spelled.)
Yumi sat happily upon the edge of the branch high up in the tree reaching up higher
and higher then..
She grabbed the apple and smiled.
"Thought I wouldn't get you didn't you? Ha! Well I di-AHHHH!!" Suddenly, the branch
broke, cousing Yumi to fall all the way to the ground. She closed her eyes tightly,
waiting for the pain of the fall.When not the slightest hint of pain didn't come, she
opened her eyes.
Her crimson eyes met with a pair of golden ones.
"Baka.[Stupid.]" He said, dropping her out of his arms.
"Owww!!Way Hiroki?? You didn't have to drop me!!"
"Be more careful baka."Hiroki closed his eyes, crossing his arms as he leaned against
"You could of killed yourself, it was to high.Now would you like to die over an
apple?" He said coldly.
"No... But I got it!!" She took a huge bite, munching happily. He laughed a little.
"Yumi,you really are a nut.. aren't you?"
Well, did you like it? Am I good? Should I start one? Please tell me, I have no idea
really, I think I might, but not sure.You don't have to message me though, if you
don't want to. But if you have time on your hands, then please message me [Or
comment!] .Or if you may just be nice and wanna tell me.
And if you liked the characters in this, then tell me if I should have them in it or
them be the stars - that is if you message me.
Last edited: 24 September 2008