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Part 6: The EndingCategory: Story: SchoolGirls (not censored)
Tuesday, 26 December 2006
08:41:01 AM (GMT)
Part 6

Nadine was always sad after Halie's death, she never touched her food, never read,
she went into a total breakdown mode again.
Except this time, she didn't get better. She got worse, and worse, and worse, until
she could no longer take the pressure of being ill,
She gave up.
She died.
Her final words were "I'm going to see Halie!"
The dad had now lost both of his daughters,  in a space of 5 weeks.
He then went into total breakdown mode, except that he survived.
He lived for 4 weeks after that.
He had a heart attack after the trauma of losing his daughters when he realised they
were never coming back to him, ever.
He died on December 25th 2006.
Nadine's mother was found, wandering the streets sometime after Halie's dad's death.
She died from stress two weeks later.
The whole family was buried beside each other.
The mother's gravestone read 'Georgia Mithlstone. Died 9th January 2007'.
The father's gravestone read 'Harvey Jackson. Died 25th December 2006'.
Nadine's read 'Nadine Mithlstone. Died 18th December 2006'.
All these gravestones lay beside one other, Halies.

Comments 
tuttinktroy says:   26 December 2006   853837  
very good, i think it would make a wonderful movie.
Jayne says:   27 December 2006   635142  
Oh wow so cool ty i'll tell Steven Spielberg, lol
tuttinktroy says:   27 December 2006   891524  
Lol, good Idea, but if you want it a little longer, try talking to
Kenny ortega!
Jayne says:   28 December 2006   382247  
LOL as if THAT would happen in MY lifetime LOL
pinkerton5 says:   30 December 2006   851962  
that was really awesome u should b a writer
Jayne says:   31 December 2006   614552  
Thanks.....But i wanna be a lawyer!!
Dayka says:   4 January 2007   789295  
oh wow that was superb!!!!! you hey you wright more
Jayne says:   5 January 2007   923655  
I can't really be bothered at the moment...lol
marz_bar says:   11 March 2007   429171  
omg i just read the whole thing and then i read it to my friend o the
phone and she started crying! its really realy realy good!!!!!
Jayne says:   11 March 2007   559378  
lolz thankies
homeypup says :   13 August 2007   823788  
i read the whole thing in 10 min it was flippin awesome

 
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