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Write my heart in. (comment please T_T)Category: poetis stuffdeds-lyrics
Sunday, 13 September 2009
03:38:30 AM (GMT)
I feel like crying
Deep inside
But instead I'm smiling
Trying to hide

What I have inside
Everything
What I seem able to give
Nothing

When I love?
I prefer who
But when they love?
I guess it's you.

And me?
I'm an extra.
What am I?
A broken fella.

Who sees me for who I am?
I don't know, they wouldn't say
Who looks at you, so sweet?
I suppose I'll meet him someday

If I'm lucky
I'll write me heart in where it goes
If I'm really me
Then it'll just go to show

When love is there
It's always there
You cant' make it come and go
It just goes to show...

When I'm blind
I'll still hear it as I talk
When I'm deaf
I'll still feel it as you walk
(Away from me)

When I'm mute
You won't notice
When I'm cold
You will just ice it
(Cold you're giving me)

I'd die without you
But would I die anyway?
I'd try without you
But I doubt I'd suceed

I'd cry without you
But I've said that before
I once spoke my mind
Just to be called a whore

I've gone unspoken
but no freaking more
I want you to know I'm broken
Not that angel from your lore

If I'm lucky
I'll write my heart in where it goes
If I'm really
Then it'll just go to show

When you have someone to care
They always care
You can,t make it come and go
It just goes to show...

When I'm in a bind
I'll wiggle as i cannot talk
When I'm down
I'll squirm as I watch you walk
(Away from me)

When I'm mute
you won't notice
When I'm cold
You will just ice it
(Cold you're giving me)

Write my heart in
fill in the blank
I'm sick of swearing
Let's just walk the plank

Write my heart in
I'm just that close to the edge
Write my heart in
Let me see your pledge

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WRITE MY HEART IN
Last edited: 13 September 2009

Comments 
lunasan says:   13 September 2009   461524  
....I'm seriously, write it in... I'm... blank...
 
Drago says:   13 September 2009   113915  
*huggles tight* meh
 
lunasan says:   13 September 2009   182396  
....good response /half-hugs
 
‹gunk› says:   13 September 2009   112844  
:<
You'll feel better soon, don't worry 

Just forget about everything and get into your nice bubble space D8
 
‹deppressedamazingAMANDA› says:   13 September 2009   547354  
aww luna ;[

great poem i hope you feel better soon.
 
Kirti says:   13 September 2009   728469  
The beginning is a bit rough but I like it.

You don't need somoenone else to love and recognize you. You are you
Luna. Each and every one of us has the tools to exist on our own, we
just don't want to. Until you find the right person, you'll be okay.
 
lunasan says:   13 September 2009   727321  
@coffee, I shall make.... DOUBOLE BUBBLE SPACE 8D
hehe ^^
@Regan thanks you, actually I sorta felt better as soon as I finished
the oekaki to go with it...
@ KIRTI YOU. ARE. SO. RIIIIIHT.
mynah, it wasn't about 'love' or anything exactly in my head, but
that's how it turned out. thanks :P 
 
‹hypnohsis› says:   17 October 2009   943932  
without you
 
lunasan says :   17 October 2009   929289  
...What?
 

 
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