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Wednesday, 1 April 2009
01:40:53 AM (GMT)
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Gentle mind turns gentle skin

Gentle feelings apon a whim

heartfelt songs and poems galore

some for love and some of gore

though still we play this game of sorrow

and hope we have someone to love tomorrow

Universal Feelings...

Tragic tragidy like unearthly desires

hearts beat so slow like the pulse of eternity

breathing in the warm cool air
and breathing out a shivering stare

steam from your breath, in hot summers night
ice from your veins, freezing inside

pale blue lips, and hands so cold
frost-bitten pain for only the heart to hold

spreading around at a slow steady pace
can't stand to be.. inside of this place

locked in my mind, so full of confusion
the only relief is a poem of passion

in stillness and silence the pulse becomes weak
as blood from my veins begin to leak

this is a tale told quite to often
and it only ends with a coffin.

old old olddd one! ...

Depression... side effects of impressions on the heart... heart bleeding going
cold... no more blood left to hold... lieing inside.. saying its alright ... but the
mask that wears ... is the one that crys these tears...

You call my phone and nobody answers... you wonder the things i want you to ... am i
alright and do i really love you... i sit in my room crying alone ... while noone's
home... searching inside myself for a reason to answer the phone... the ringing stops
and you've given up hope... just as mine returns ... jumping at the phone... wanting
to hear your voice no matter how much it burns... then all i hear is a dialtone...
everything goes silent... even my pounding heart goes quiet... tears are frozen deep
inside ... from the extinguished flame you blew out tonight... thinking back on it
you push it away... nagging deeper into your brain... do you want to know ... is it
over... or has it just begun for us  and then.... the rings start ... its your turn
to choose... answer the phone ... or are you that hurt by the bruise... praying to
god ... saying please answer me just one time... i need this moment .... right now
right here... to survive all the lies... that are meaningless ... to us...

Tell me what you think of these but nicely please? ...

layouts_by_vampy says:   1 April 2009   396559  
did you make this?
‹internal blender› says:   1 April 2009   221816  
yeah all written by me : /
‹PLUR› says:   1 April 2009   153837  
i really like the first one the best
its simple yet strong
‹internal blender› says:   1 April 2009   518187  
thank you ^_^
‹(-x-)KileyKABOOM(-x-)› says:   1 April 2009   622573  
lol i dont have any criticism at all! i love them ^^
‹EmoGurl<3› says:   13 May 2009   489223  
wow thats pretty kool
‹internal blender› says:   14 May 2009   478732  
thank you
‹EmoGurl<3› says:   19 May 2009   887336  
so u actually a sweet caring guy.... never knew haha jk i knew all
this time!
love you 4 ev alex!
KnowBYnow says :   12 January 2010   776725  
The first one was great.


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