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first poem

well all my friends got into poetry so i wanted to try it for my self,so tell me what you think and if i should keep
going or just stop making a fool of myself. well here we go.

I write in the darkness.
The ambassador of pain.
These atrocities and diseases. 
They're my middle name.

Afflicted there are many.
Healed there are few.
When I sink my poison.
You will all be through.

Unspeakable terrible things
That my anger brings out.
Killer with no conscious.
Suffering in mass amounts.

So when your sad and lonely.
And searching for a friend.
In me you've found evil.
In me you've found your end.

So you can hide if you wish.
But your scent I can smell.
The world is wide and vast.
But there are many ways to hell.

thats it what do ya think?
 
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chocolate_sexii_mama says: 1 March 2007  
wow freaky
mayorga says: 1 March 2007  
its kool! luv it its not freaky
demonic_emo says: 1 March 2007  
well thanks i guess 
MoonGoddess7 says: 2 March 2007  
awesome and freaky @ the same time
ashleynkerensa6 says: 3 March 2007  
i loved it but frecky
giana445 says: 3 March 2007  
not frecky but really awesome u really cool
loserXcitygurl57 says: 3 March 2007  
Very cool poem! Nice work for a first poem.

Dark and deep and other stuff I don't feel like naming....

"So you can hide if you wish. But your scent I can smell. The world is wide and vast.
But there are many ways to hell."

That was the past stanza, freaky as hell but kick*ss!
xXxMizzRosiexXx says: 3 March 2007  
kinda scary lol! but cool its really emotional
MrHello says: 10 March 2007  
Totally cool.Well emotional.GO VICTOR!!!!GO VICTOR GO VICTOR
saph writes: 11 March 2007  
OHHHH MYYYY GOOOOOOD!!! *shocked face* THAT IS SOOO FREAKY....haha jks...just taking
the piss with the other comments

not bad for a first poem....like its well written and everything....
the_quiet_one_speaks writes: 22 March 2007  
That is really good. Very good for a first poem. Way better than most of my poems.
Faith says: 22 March 2007  
very dark, and i like that sort of stuff, an excellent first try i think
demonic_emo says: 24 March 2007  
wow i didnt think it was that good ^_^
MCRluver667 says: 24 March 2007  
thats au some dude
fieldhockeygirl101 says: 26 March 2007  
omg i love it its so awesome
mayorga says: 27 March 2007  
i still luv it!!! XD
punkrocker3 says: 27 March 2007  
way cool!
prettynpunk13jd says: 7 April 2007  
deep, i luv it. i don't find it freaky at all, i think its really good
MCRMEG says: 7 April 2007  
Wow that is really good.. i luv it!!! 
please keep doing it! 
=]
woahthatshawt says: 18 April 2007  
nice... i love it.. i write poems too. its addicting. i will post one of mine. once
i find out how too !! lol <333
paper_heart3 says: 18 April 2007  
its good 
bubbles_girl_13 says: 9 June 2007  
it kicked ass. you seriously need to write lots more. it was minorly horrifying, but
at the same time it was deep and touching. -shiver-

it was awesome.
AngieLovesGreen14 says: 11 June 2007  
thats good! ^^ you should keep going!
fatal_minded_me says: 11 June 2007  
that poem is absolutely awesome!!!!!!! i LOVE it!!!! wow...!!!!!!!!! i love the
horror touch!!!! its amazing!!! seriously...you should write another one!!!!
LilHottie15 says: 6 August 2007  
i really liked it
sk8erhottie05 says: 6 August 2007  
OH MI GOSH DUDE!!
THATS SOO AWESHUM HOMIE!!!
LMAO!!!
demonic_emo says: 6 August 2007  
thanks meh homie = )
Kamino says: 6 August 2007  
I Love it lots. Truth...

Indeed there are many ways to hell... 

Very cool. :P
KOTORgamegirl says: 7 August 2007  
omg kewl!
sk8erhottie05 says: 7 August 2007  
your welcomez meh homiee!!
demonic_emo says: 7 August 2007  
How has everybody found my poem all of a sudden!!!
musicfreak says: 7 August 2007  
i luv this poem!!!!! ♥ ...are you a closet poet???!!!
x_Rebel says: 7 August 2007  
Very good poem very deep
ixlovexemoxboys says : 7 August 2007  
very awesomeful!!!!
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