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Missing Pieces

new song please tell me what you think(took me only like 2-4 hours, and i was in school)

Missing Pieces

To see your shame in front of you
Write it in blood on the wall
Love fading away like the wounds
On death's doorstep
Her gaze like ice
Arms like winter's grasp.

[Verse 1]
An ache unyielding
Never waiting
Always hating
Your missing pieces
Fading away
Going astray
You cry to yourself
Screaming in pain
See the bloodstain
Hoping that it will all end.

You are missing pieces
Your most important parts
Scars serve as reminders
Of your life falling apart
You cut out the pain
With a razor-thin blade
Watching your hurt drip down
In vain.


No, don't give in
Don't give up
There is hope 
When all seems lost
Drop the blade
Scream your name
You can still win
And live life once again.

[Verse 2]
Darkness approaches
Looming over
Coming closer
Light disappearing
Fogbank rising
Angels escaping
Not together
Leaving feathers
Falling right out of the sky.


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  ‹Musician_Of_God› — Page created: 28 April 2008  |  Last modified: 29 April 2008
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‹~AJ+Iz+Back~› says:   28 April 2008   753774  
wow that songs like depressing yet awesome at the same time
‹Musician_Of_God› says:   28 April 2008   614885  
well i tried not to make it too depressing, i mean the chorus is supposed to make
you feel better
‹~AJ+Iz+Back~› says:   28 April 2008   193514  
ya i saw and i was blown away by the emotions put into the song
NarutoFanGirlForever says:   29 April 2008   643361  
so sad and cool and WOW nice song
Katilix says:   29 April 2008   958461  
Wow, Zexion. This is probably the best yet. The overall lyrics are powerful enough
to create the song, but there is a specific rhythm in the words that makes you hear
the music without really listening to it.
Lover_Overeasy says:   29 April 2008   954869  

You write better songs than me.

I never finnish
‹Musician_Of_God› says:   29 April 2008   418177  
thanks guys, glad you all like it, i have had a burst of creativity lately, this
song i wrote in like 4 hours, but no music unfortunately....DX but that will come
cute_punk33 says :   29 April 2008   177335  
aww thats just soo wow i love it its beautiful
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