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Abuse By Desire

Hi this is a story of a little dog from puppy to starved adult. 

One day,Eddy, a dog was adopted by a man named Jaun Moskevitch. Jaun Moskevitch was a good owner until he and his wife
divorced. After the divorce Jaun went on drugs. Eddy, the dog, wasn't given any food and by the time he was a teenager
he almost was too weak to lift his head.

When Jaun started to go heavy on drugs no one could stop him so he died in his own home. But the bad thing was when he
died no one was there so no one knew he was dead.

Eddy was terrified. He was starving. He was hot in the house. The doors were shut and it was summer which meant no one
was home, so when he barked no one heard him.

When Eddy heard the neighbors coming back he barked and barked until his voice couldn't choke out one more thing. When
he heard some cops pull up he slowly dragged himself to the door and waited. By the time he got to the door he fell
asleep. He was so weak he could only go 2 meters and then he had to stop and rest.

Eddy got scared, and finally one of the neighbors knocked on the door. Eddy choked out a bark and the police stomped
down the door. Eddy, got so excited that when he saw the people he used all his energy and jumped to them.

When the ASPCA saw the dog they were utterly shocked that he was still alive! His
ribs showed clear, his eyes were so clogged with sleep he couldn't see, the pads on
the bottom of his feat were so dry they were cracking, and he was so weak he

The ASPCA took him in and after two days of hard work Eddy was finally strong enough
to walk around the room, but he could only walk for about 2 minutes then he had to
sit down.

On the fifth day of treatment Eddy could walk down the block from the ASPCA center
and not get tired. Eddy was so proud of himself. The ASPCA thought he was definetly
going to recover from his weakness and he would soon be a good enough to be adopted.

After 2 weeks of hard treatment, Eddy was so healthy he was more active than all the
other dogs in the ASPCA and in two days Eddy was adopted by a loving couple and two

If you want me to write more comment me---=)
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Abdalla says:   4 April 2007   633592  
poor puppy can I countinue?
Sydalicous11 says:   5 April 2007   286787  
you mean you want to write some of it or do you want me to???? lol anyways i am
continuing today so yeah but it will be a while lol
hotgirl56 says:   5 April 2007   854323  
omg write more that is so sad 
Sydalicous11 says:   5 April 2007   768778  
ok i will just later cause i'm tired
my_username_rocks says:   5 April 2007   266155  
whohh sister that is al most to sad to read!!!!!!!!
Sydalicous11 says:   5 April 2007   487455  
awwwww thank you

would you like me to write more my_username_rocks??
smartblonde says:   5 April 2007   359932  
oh thats so sad! i have sympathy for the puppy majorly
olivia416 says:   5 April 2007   195846  
please write more!!!

the poor dog...
music_lova says:   5 April 2007   843342  
poor poor puppy!write more!!!!!!!!
Sydalicous11 says:   5 April 2007   575173  
ok i write more now
girlsense says:   6 April 2007   169966  
the dog is so sad. is it true?
Sydalicous11 says:   6 April 2007   449375  
no it is a fiction story that i made up cause i was watchin animal planet but this
wasn't one of the cases cause i put some extra parts in
mew_berry_san says:   7 April 2007   793794  
Poor doggy!!!
Sydalicous11 says:   9 April 2007   475314  
yeah i know so who wants me to write more
Laura24dr says:   9 April 2007   733775  
i feel so sad. i think i'm going 2 cry.
Sydalicous11 says:   12 April 2007   162929  
awwwwwww don't cry
katali121 says:   14 April 2007   417686  
Sydalicous11 can I write some more for you?
girl101 says:   14 April 2007   449579  
puppy911play says:   14 April 2007   757786  
ahhhhhhhhhhh thats so sad
Sydalicous11 says:   15 April 2007   936424  
yes u may katali it will be nice to have more origanality in my story
Midnight_Star_Storm says:   17 April 2007   866411  
I_wonder_Y says:   17 April 2007   316783  
please continue.
Sydalicous11 says:   17 April 2007   216167  
ok i guess everyone like it lol
cute_monkey says:   18 April 2007   671956  
awwwww so sad and so sweet!
Sydalicous11 says:   18 April 2007   328927  
i can't continue until 2marrow cause i am planning a wedding for a girl (if you want
a party bachlorette party/bachelor party or anything go to Party maker!) yeah so it
will be a while
Sydalicous12 says:   21 April 2007   658859  
hey guys umm yeah well umm i forgot my password so go to my new thing it is still
called abuse by desire tho!!!!!!!!
‹leelou› shouts:   22 April 2007   223267  
write more what happened after when he was adopted?
Sydalicous11 says:   23 April 2007   668529  
nvm i got my password back lol hehe
Sydalicous11 says:   23 April 2007   627321  
ok leelou123
ChibiRini says:   5 May 2007   643273  
you have got to write more!!! It is so sad............. what happens to the little
puppy after the couple adopt him? I have to know!
my_username_rocks says :   6 May 2007   336147  
yessss please write more write more!!!!!!!!!

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