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These are some poems I wrote. I know boys aren't really supposed to be good poets but........

You used to make me laugh
You used to make me smile
You used to make me jump for joy
And grin after a while

But Heaven's wings swept down
And A cold wind started to blow
And God reached down his mighty hand
And said it's time to go.

You left this world, 
A lonely place
And I'll never forget
Your loving, kind, smiling face

Lonelyness seems black.
Like a midnight stroll.
I see stars.
I hear screming.
I smell salt and blood.
I taste licorice.
I touch nothing for I am alone.

I hope you guys like them. I worked really hard. They all come from the heart. Here's one more:

Never let go
Never say bye
Those were the words
Of the old wrinkled guy

He told me a story,
About when he let go
Of the hand of a man
10 lonely years ago

It sent him down 
Into the sea
Where he swam to an island 
Called Hawaii

That was the poem I wrote from a movie called The Guardian. The ending is different though. If you haven't seen this
movie you really should. It's the best I've ever seen.
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  MrCaruso — Page created: 9 February 2007  |  Last modified: 12 February 2007
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Ida_Of_Lunacy says:   9 February 2007   392187  
Cute. ^^;
‹Twilight Night› says :   23 February 2008   657194  
the ont about the move The Gardian

I thought that was a lil weird at first then i saw it was bout The
soi sadi wow i like that movie but anywasy i liek that poem

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