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Writing a story!

Writing a story! This is a story about a girl called Kiko Suzuki, she is an angel that came from heaven to restore peace to the world. She can only do so by reuniting the angels of all colors. They all have musical insturments to defeat the bad guys, and Have expressions. If you wish to make a chraracter... please write Nameex. May Imai) Ageex:1 color: (ex:brown) expression(ex: Love) Siblingsex:yes, with Kiko.She is her older sister) musical insturment: (ex.tambourine) When she/he comes into the story ex. Kiko meets her at a park) Yes, there can be twins, or sisters. If you don't like the picture selected on your chosen color, please submit the new picture and I will post it. Please no boy angels, but there will be boy characters. Please no more other color-angels, except for the ones I made, plz. Remember to read the story, once the first chpter comes out in September! And a hyper girly-girl angel. Name:Kiko Hirugata Age:14 color: lavender expression:peace Siblings:yes, with Naumi. musical insturment: Microphone When she/he comes into the story: Dude, she is the main character! as human: Name: Ren Tsuki Age:14 color:indigo expression:kindness siblings:none musical insturment:guitar personality:quiet but tough When she/he comes into the story: At Kiko's school. human: Name: Emma Age:14 color:orange expression:happiness siblings:none musical insturment:flute personality:always positive and happy, careing, and a bit childish When she/he comes into the story: At Kiko's school. personality:always positive and happy, careing, and a bit childish Name: Naumi Hirugata Age:17 color:green expression: siblings:none musical insturment:violin(she uses it like an arrow or if she plays a chord the sound waves r so strong its like a sword peircing through u) personality:she is loyal to her duties but will follow her heart every chance posible without hesitation. in her human form she teaches kenjutsu (kendo+jui-jitsu) to young kids. she is always sweet to her students and friends but can get serious in an instant when a challenge pops up that she has to take. very competitive and will jump into anything recklessly which will probably be her biggest weakness. Pink purple red yellow light blue yes, she is an angel, but dark. She used to be the white angel. Yuuri Saito angel of darkness and anger 18 dark, on the dark side. eventually becomes good. u will have to read the story... mua ha ha. this is when she turns good. white
 
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icesk8er4ever says:   24 August 2008   642641  
so wait...is it a role playing thingy....anyway i wanna be...
orange
angel of happyness
she uses a flute 
personality:always posotive and happy, careing, and a bit childish
 
Rena9000 says:   24 August 2008   382524  
its kinda a role playing thing...KINDA!!!!!!
thats a really cool person! 
Okay, i think u need a name with this!
 
icesk8er4ever says:   24 August 2008   126622  
oh ok....um...how about emma
 
Rena9000 says:   24 August 2008   574752  
we need guys!!!!!!!
 
Rena9000 says:   24 August 2008   775529  
oh yea! heres mine as a human! 
 
ninjagirl_999 says:   24 August 2008   679628  
she could be like one of the lst to be united cuz she doesn't want to join till she
has to
 
icesk8er4ever says:   25 August 2008   613698  
ok ok im redoing mine with the age in it...

orange
Emma
14
angel of happyness
she uses a flute 
personality:always posotive and happy, careing, and a bit childish
 
Vexed says:   26 November 2008   272859  
This is a very cliche story idea. Magical instruments to defeat "bad guys"? How
un-interesting. Try to make a more interesting way of defeating the enemies such as:
One "colored angel" could have a lion/deer or something of that sort to fight with.
And what's up with that "she came down from heaven to restore peace"? It should be
something like, "Athena the goddess of wisdom has sent you too root out the
mulitcolored angels. And protect the world from the evil that shadows it." I kind of
makes it more interesting and takes from the cliche side to it.

Just saying, to make your story more interesting and getting more views try some of
my ideas.
MewMewSugar says :   27 November 2008   127441  
..okay. You can help me.
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