i like the story line you have but you should expand your idea a little more
personaly i like the idea of a clash of people in your story.
some wanting to leave and some wanting to keep people in

i think you could have kids names like jack, naomi, maybe even sakura or somethin

Characters Baseline -
First and Last Name :Namine Minomoto
Gender :Female
Likes :standing up for others,and being called"Queen or Princess"
Dilikes :being left out
Personality : loyal and courage
Picture : 
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m204/Wonderland_of_stars/Anime%20Female/Female/142
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Ashe, 
great info, but the picture!
it didn't show.

oh i'll try another:


:D

:D thats great!
thanks

Characters Baseline -  She grew up as a magician's apprintice, but was a prodigy as
soon as she started, so the magician ordered her to leave. SHe can beat the average
monster.
First and Last Name :Elestisa Tsesunjia
Gender :Girl
Likes :Magic(she's very good at it) music and friends
Dilikes : Meanies
Personality : SHe is a quite girl. She is nice and usually silent. Very pretty.

Picture : 

when fighting:

Characters Baseline - Dreams of being a star
First and Last Name : Yuri Sotana
Gender : female
Likes : music,animals,food,stuffed animals
Dilikes : bugs,meanies,being left out,being teased
Personality : fun,kind,stubborn,sporty,tough.
Picture : 

Characters Baseline -
First and Last Name : Yuuki Hirano
Gender : Female
Likes : Reading, Writing, and Jelly Fish, and Time travellers, Aliens, cenataur,
gryffins, anythink mythical or legendary.
Dilikes : Bullies, non believers, maths teach
Personality : quiet and shy, but once she knows a person she is loud and happy. 
Her Familiy was killed when she was little, and she was left a huge house, tonnes of
money and all the miads and butlers ect, that lived in the house,
when she was adopted her new familiy despised her, they wouldnt even let her in the
house until everyone was asleep, she didnt get no meals or no presents or nothing.
soon, her familiy were killed, infront of her eyes, having a photographic memory she
remebers the scene as clear as crystal. she is now a traveller, who helps preform
street shows and knows about medicine, and fights.
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